假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is known to all that we students today have to fix our attention to our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Miss Brown,
We have received your application last week. We regret 76. ______
to inform you that our company has hired other girl for 77. ______
the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, 78. ______
we have decided that we need someone with more office’s 79. ______
experience for this particular position. You have impressed 80. ______
us, but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work 81. ______
hard. We hope that you will apply for position with our 82. ______
company some times in the future. We would like to 83. ______
thank you for your interesting in our company. Please 84. ______
contact to us if there are further questions. 85. ______
Yours sincerely,
John smith
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple76._________
of days ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks 77.__________
from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to 78__________
enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of then got poisoned and79__________
had stomachaches with our faces pale. They were quickly 80.__________
sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and81.__________
gave them some medicine. They out of dangerous82__________
soon before taking the medicine. This accident should83._________
make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. 84.__________
I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more.85.__________
VII短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
One day, I went to the market and find many 76.
beautiful birds in few cages for sale. I heard 77.
two young men talked.One said,“I caught eight 78.
birds like these on last Sunday, but not a single one 79.
was lively the next morning.” Oh, God! The birds 80.
are being killed. The number is reducing year after year. 81.
Birds, like another animals, are our friends. They eat a 82.
lot of pests and make our nature beautifully. 83.
So we must do something to prevent them killed. 84.
We wish that everyone will care for them. 85.
II. 短文改错（共15分）
如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正:该行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词.该行错一个词: 在错的词下面划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正的词.
During the summer holiday, I think I should do something 76.__________
meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food77.__________
restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day78.__________
for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless， 79.__________
that made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. 80.__________
After all, I stuck to(坚持) it with determination. Every day I started 81.__________
off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the 82.__________
evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term83.__________
began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really84.__________
a successfully experience, which is worth remembering for ever.85.__________
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can win them if we won't make any mistakes.