假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。（请将答案写在答题纸上）
As far as I can remember, grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones. We rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my life. I attended to school to learn a variety of course, and went camping overnight in the woods. My dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned early. During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lake. In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the time. It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed. This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio. There was no rivers or lakes to fish in at all.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There will be a speech on our school playground this Saturday afternoon, which theme is “To civilize schoolyard is my responsibility”. All the teachers and students required to attend. In the activity, the first two winner in each grade will give such valuable advice as follows: we should not litter somewhere in order to keep our campus clean; we should love flowers, grass and trees such that everyone can enjoy the greenness; we should behave well instead of run after one another, quarreling and fighting noisy; we should care for the others so that our school will be full with love. We believe your school will become more and more beautiful and peaceful.
Dear Ms. Smith,
I appreciate your help very much. On the first day of camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that, you always gave me specially attention and encouraged to me to join in activities. As the result, I gradually got to know the other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person. My grades improved. I became very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting into a college. I am proud of it. I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear sir,
I'm glad to recommend （推荐）you to my friend Li Ming．Li Ming was born in July 15 , 1974 in Beijing．He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986．
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art．After graduating from No．4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics．After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study．Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year．He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
Looking forward to receive your early reply．
此题要求改正所给句子中的错误。
每句只有一个错误。若该句多一个词，把多余的词用（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。若该句缺一个词，在缺词处用一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。若该句错一个词，在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：不要改动原句的意思。Berners-Lee made possible for everyone to use the Internet, not just the army.
The more closer you are, the more you will see.
My English teacher explains grammar so clearly that I feel I can make great progresses with her.
This is the first time that Edward visited our hometown Mian Yang.
You can shorten the words by taking out unimportant letters in them and use numbers instead of words when sending a text message.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As senior three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. I always feel gratitude for their unselfish care and love. Thanks to their constant encouragement, I have made rapidly progress in my studies.
It will be less than one month since the final exam, so I’m under the pressure now. I would appreciate if they could have a frequent talk with me but provide me with timely help, which contributes to keep a good state.
I have made up my mind to study hard, for I believe hard work was the key to success. Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in various sports activity to build up my body.