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Union is strength no matter when you’re facing difficulties or in a dilemma. Cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.
There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, it was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a great difference. Now I am getting well with my friends.
My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation, can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying go “United, we stand; divided, we fall.”
Over the past twenty years, American country music become 1.
more and more popular. Some writers are no longer writing about 2.
modern values of the USA. In 1950s, American music was about other3.
things . Money was also thought to be important. Ten years late, 4.
some writers turned other subjects. During these years, many young 5.
students were angry with society. So songs were often full of angry. 6.
Political leaders were not well thought and those songs often made 7.
fun of them. Country music today remains much the same as ago. 8.
One subject which country music often returns is “the good old days”.9.
And in “the good old days”, people love life on the open air. 10.
Thank you for your e-mail ! You ask about my friends and what 1.
we like to do. I guess I do that most people do. I like reading books, 2.
watch films and listening to music. My favorite sport is volleyball. 3.
Most my friends play volleyball with me. My best friend is two older4.
years than me. She goes to a different school and we always get 5.
together after school to talk and have fun. Tell me yourself, your friends6.
and what you like to do. I would also like to know something about7.
China . We have read about China in school and I am very interesting 8.
in learning more about it. Please e-mail to me soon. Thanks. 9.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon now. 10.
Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the 1.
class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw 2.
a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter 3.
saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call4.
softly,“Miss, Miss.” She moved slightly and gave no clear response .5.
He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing . Then he 6.
suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing 7.
out. She might have hit by a car. He dialled 120 and called an ambulance8.
while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by 9.
roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. 10.
It was snowing heavy on Monday morning. Li Hua was at 1.
the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After a 2.
while a bus came and she got on it. There had many passengers 3.
in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out the 4.
windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. A driver turned around 5.
and said“Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off 6.
and help push the bus.”When he heard this, Li Hua and the other 7.
passengers got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing 8.
the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All 9.
the passengers were smiling but the sun was shining. 10.
One Sunday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa are 1.
feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy 2.
because it had enough food and water. Li Ming.did not 3.
know why not. The next morning on his way to school, 4.
Li Ming saw some birds flew in the sky. Then he thought 5.
about the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his 6.
grandpa to set the bird free. When he got to home, he said 7.
to his Grandpa,“Birds also need friends!” To his delighted , his 8.
grandpa agreed.The bird set free. Grandpa and the children 9.
were very happy to see the bird flying away in the sky. 10.