短文改错(共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师-优题课

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to help students developing their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some change in the grading system.The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of them will come from your test results. 20% comes from your notes, and other 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take the active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class are also important. If you want a high score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.
In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. To begin with, this new grading system has been changed the way the students' performances in school only depended upon their test results. It will also certain help to improve ourselves in many ways.

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting. According to the recent survey, about 85.5 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.yet for various reason, many students do not want to improve our handwritiing . 51.5 percent of the students think it is no need to waste time improve their handwriting , and 32.3 percent believe that they are busy with the study that they don not have time to practice. 10.9percent think that practice handwriting is useless. As the saying goes, that handwriting shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especial for middle school students .therefore, in my opinion, much emphasis should be placed in this aspect in the future.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线( \ )划掉。[来该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Travelling by subway can be quite a adventure, especially during rush hours. You have to fight your way into the carriage, and that’s not the end. You also have to protect yourself from big backpacks and fight for space with this who sit and stretch their legs.
To deal with this problem, New York City has start a campaign making people take off their backpacks on the subway. The movement is also aiming at male riders who like spreading their legs to take up two, or even three seats.
Some people say that the campaign limit everyone’s freedom. Male travelers even feel it is unfair, saying that women who cross their legs also take up too much space. So the campaign has been supported by people who are concerned about person behavior in public spaces.
In fact, all countries have written or unwritten rule that travelers are expected to follow. For example, eating and drinking on the subway are banned in many cities, include Washington DC in the US and Brussels in Belgium.
So next time when you take public transportation, avoid bad behavior.

He spends most of his spare time doing volunteer work at weekends, help the old or the disabled, who shows his character of responsibility and kindness. With great intelligence, diligence, good learning methods and positive attitudes, he studied well in all the subjects and often ranks among the top three in the class. After class, he is active in the playground, music clubs and some community. The sport he likes most is playing basketball but he has served as the leader of our school basketball team for two years. He also takes great delight at Chinese opera as well as singing pop songs. Beside, he takes an active part in all sort of social practices.
In a word, Li Hua is an outstanding student, who has set a good example for them.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线( \ )划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Mom,
The Mother’s Day is coming.I’m sorry that I am on abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before.But today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loud: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much for not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you.
Hope you good health and much happiness every day!
Your little girl,
Jennifer