假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I always think my mother is also your good friend. When I lose my first tooth, when I found a friend, and when I fell off from my bike, she was there. She was proud when I succeeded but supportive when I failed. She always listened me. She seemed to know when I was asking for advices and when I just needed a good cry. We actual shared experiences, hopes, sadness and fears. She made me felt that my opinions were never small and silly. She never forgot to tell me what she believed in me. Now my mother is facing with some difficulties in life. I want to tell her everything will be OK and I believe in her, too.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号 (∧) , 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
I always wanted to be great scientist. I had a dream of discovering a new drug that would save hundreds of people’s life. Unfortunately, I was never very well at chemistry at school and the teacher was used to get angry with me. I decided to becoming an inventor and designed an amazing new product. My parents were encouraging, but told me to be a few more realistic. A few weeks late, I had an idea of designing a pen to write in water. In my disappointment, a friend of me pointed out that it was not a new invention.
下面段文中共有10处语言错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great diversity of robots. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just as real people do, included playing chess, playing the piano and draw pictures. Besides, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which makes us delighted. However, that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced even if they were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of about robots, especially about their functions. The great human wisdom is so powerfully that it makes us feel more comfortable live in the world.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号“∧”, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (﹨) 划掉。修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注:1: 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2:只允许修改10处,多者不计分(从11处起)
I was in hotel near the beach. It had been very windy for a few hours and it have rained for two days. Sudden, the wind became much stronger. There were some tree across the road near the beach and they begin to move from side to side. The hotel manager said what we had to stayed in the hotel because this was the start of a hurricane. We closed all the windows and stayed in their rooms. The hurricane lasted it for two days. It was terrified.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜
线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
The Internet is playing a important part in
our daily life. On the net, we can learn about
news both home and abroad and some other
informations as well.We can also make phone calls,
send messages by e-mails,go to net schools,and
learn foreign languages by ourselves.Beside,we
can enjoy music,watch sports matches and play the
chess or cards.The net also help us do some shopping,
make a chat with others and make friends with them.
In a word,the Internet has made our life more easier.
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线 \ 划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to play joke
on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him.
“But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t
know what to do. “Let’s do this, “ Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor
comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor comes to check
the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets-----one for him and the other for his friend.