短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear friends,
I have some advices about computers to share with you.
Now the computer had become a good friend of students. It has made our life more colorful. We can get information fast under its help. Through the Internet we can talk with people thousands of miles away.
However, there have some disadvantages. It gives us some trouble. I’m afraid that we spend a bit too much time play games in front of the screen. Our studies and health are getting worse. Our parents are beginning to worry us. In the addition, we surely have less time leaving to get together with others. In this case, the computer is taking away our human nature.
I suggest that we would use the computer to improve our life and work on the one hand, and enjoy the sunshine or fresh air with our fiends on the other hand.
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This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very
crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy
in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be
sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with
the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.
Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This
uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have
heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.
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The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the Committee of our
community will organise the activity. All residents they are interested in farming are invited to
take part the activity. Weather permitted, we’ll ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a
farm. It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some vegetables,
plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be trained and guide while
farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste
some fresh produce unless you are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!
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Dear Editor,
Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research
group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible for fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.
I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be friendly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
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Dear David,
I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the factthatI seldom cheat in exams and I just can’t stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred themto my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-confidence. It’s time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!