短文改错(共1小题)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
College students have few ways to pay their college fees.Many students have their parents to do it.Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus.Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship, in this way they can pay at least part of the fees.As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are that rich.Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects.Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately 3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home, 4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.
I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________
of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________
don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________
abroad for change this year. Where I’d like4.___________
to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5.___________
has the trouble of changing money abroad. But6.___________
when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new 7.___________
places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited. 8.___________
In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my 9.___________
French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work . 10.___________
Today is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. 1.___________
At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there 2.___________
was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because 3.___________
these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two. 4.___________
At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was 5.___________
very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the 6.___________
film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even 7.___________
burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble 8.___________
and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film, It is very worth 9.___________
seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy! 10.____________
How many time do you spend with your parents? 1.___________
Your parents are your dearer people in the world 2.___________
when you are young. And they always care of you 3.___________
deep. But even though many children still love their 4.___________
mum and dad, families may become more close 5.___________
as you get older. The end of the year is a time for 6.___________
families to get together. Have you ever thought of 7.___________
how you can show your parents that you love them? 8.___________
Find a chance and do something for them or to have 9.___________
sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents 10.___________
will be very happy.