短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the Internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep it in mind that being politely in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
Last week my parents and I took a twoday trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous 76. _______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _______
was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _______
the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 79. _______
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81. _______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _______
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _______
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _______
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _______
head touched the pillow.
I'm the captain of our school team so with my 76. _________
fellow players we've won several games. There 77. _________
will an important game next month. But one of the 78. _________
best players in our team told me just then that he 79. _________
wouldn't play basketball once more. His parents 80. _________
asked him to spend in more time preparing for the 81. _________
college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. 82. _________
But his parents think go to college is more important 83. _________
than playing sports and college was the only place 84. _________
for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no 85. _________
choice. He wanted to make his parents happy.
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young
people. According to studies, any children spend more time 76. _______
watching television than they spend in school. Because so 77. _______
much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of 78. _______
read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 79. _______
much about the radio program young people listen to, 80. _______
although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about 81. _______
the effects of television commercials. On one year the 82. _______
average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all 83. _______
planned and written by grownups to make children to want 84. _______
things that they don't real need.85. _______
When I first learned to write in English, I ran into many 76. ________
difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought 77. ________
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 78. ________
My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her 79. ________
advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 80. ________
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was 81. ________
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote 82. ________
a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it 83. ________
very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was 84. ________
a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. 85. ________
The day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher 86. _________
talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 87. _________
wished me success, but it didn't matter that I would 88. _________
win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so 89. _________
nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people 90. _________
present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in 91. _________
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered 92. _________
her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first 93. _________
prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 94. _________
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 95. _________