短文中共有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city.We started off at8:00 a.m.First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular tourist spot in Beijing.Then we visited the History Museum.We observed a lot of valuable things in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history.After a quick meal, we went to Beihai Park. Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes.We spent a whole afternoon appreciated the wonder.It was until 18:00 p.m.that we went back.We did have a wonderful time.Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal.
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear friends,
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse other than better. Our life and health have affected greatly. The earth is our home, but we have a duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but for future generation. Fortunate, more and more people have become aware of this problem. Many effective measures have been taken by the government to dealing with them.
As a student I think we should do something to improve the environment. First, go to the school on foot or by bike as often as possible. Second, turn on the lights and other electrical appliances before leaving the room. Third, never throw rubbish here and there.
It’s time that we do something to protect our environment.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Katherine,
How exciting I am to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday.Fortunately, I won' t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.You won' t find difficult to get to the city center.The airport bus left every 30 minute and will take you right to the International Hotel.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.I will take you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we' 11 talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.Having a pleasant trip and see you on Friday.
Sincerely yours
Zhang Lin
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When Jack bowed to someone, he always did it much too quickly. They needn't to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head. So he was blamed for no manner. Then a warm-hearted man teaches him, "When you bow to somebody next time, you can count the January, February, March, until December. Then you can lift your body. Thus, the ceremony will almost perfect. The next day, he met his uncle, but he did as the man told him to. The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look. When Jack looked down, he found his uncle gone. So he asked a passer-by, "In which month did she go away?"
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I showed some foreign friend around our city. We started off in car from the Friendship Hotel at 8:00 a.m. We first got to Jiangnan Park. We are all struck by its beautiful flowers on show. Then, we visited the City Museum. We saw plenty of valuable things, from that we learned a lot about the city. After that, they drove to Bei Shan Park. That is a beautiful place of interest in our city, but there we enjoyed the wonderfully scenery of the lake. We had delicious lunch at the seafood restaurant and we returned back at noon. All the foreign friends were pleased with my arrangement. We did have the wonderful time today.
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It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in that moment when I felt I was a grown-up