短文改错, 格式错误不得分
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Life is full of ups and downs but it is never too easy to achieve success. As the old English say goes “Failure is the mother of success.” I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. After the match, I was confident I would win. Therefore, I failed. How sadly I was! Luckily, my P.E. teacher helped me out. He told me not to lose my heart. He also helped me my skills. With his help, my confidence returned and I come up with several new idea. The next day, though I had to play against another more experience boy, I beat him. So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well, failure can be the mother of success.
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jack Green was the football coach at an American college. He was appointed to find good players, and they weren’t smart enough to be accepted.
One day, the coach has brought an excellent player to the director of the college and suggested the student allowed to enter without an examination. “Well,” the director said after thinking for a while, “I’d better ask you a few questions first.” Then the student was called for and asked some easier questions, but he didn’t know any of the answers. At last the director said, “Well, what is thirty – four minus two?” It was quite a long time when the student answered, “Thirty – three.” The director threw up his hands and looked at the coach disappointed, but the coach said, “Oh, please let him in, sir! He was only wrong by two comparing with all the others.”
第Ⅱ卷（满分35分）
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断;如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误);则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Last Sunday morning Mr. Wang left home early go fishing.76．
Very soon he got to a river. He sat on the bank or began 77．
to fish. But he was unlucky. When sun was setting he still78．
didn’t catch any fish, and they felt very disappointed. 79．
On his way home, he thought that his wife might 80．
laugh at him because of he hadn’t caught any fish. How to save 81．
face? He became very worrying. Suddenly he got an idea. 82．
He immediately run to the fish market and bought a 83．
big fish. Then he hurried home happy, thinking that 84．
his wife would praise him for get the big fish.85．
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Daniel and Lisa lived next door to a nice lady named Mrs
Green．She was very good cook and often 76．________
made for delicious cakes．The children could smell 77．________
them．"How can you get some cakes?" Daniel said to Lisa, 78．________
"We can't go and ask for some．That does not seem politely." 79．________
"I know which to do," Lisa said．"Come with me．" Then 80．________
they went Mrs Green’s house．Lisa knocked at the door 81．________
and Mrs Green opened it．Lisa said, "Hello, do you play 82．________
with us?" She laughed and asking, "What game do you 83．________
want to play?" "We want to play 'In a zoo'．We are 84．________
animals and you are the keeper who feed us with your 85．________
cakes. All right? "
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I went to see a film with my brother after supper.
On our way to the cinema, we meet an American girl named76. ________
Alice, she had got lost and looked very anxious. We went 77. ________
up to see that was the matter. We then took her to the hotel. 78. ________
While going there we told her the great changes that had 79. ________
been taken place in our country in the past few years and 80. ________
Alice told us a lot about the youth in American. 81. ________
Although we missed the film, but we felt very happy, 82. ________
for we not only helped Alice get out of troubles but also 83. ________
knew something about United States. We saw that English 84. ________
can strength understanding and friendship.85. ________
第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Huajian,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two76._________
weeks ago. I have been thinking about the question you asked me. 77._________
In my opinion, you should go back after you finish your 78._________
studies abroad. For one reason, which you are studying is badly 79._________
needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy of you to 80._________
find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company here 81._________
in our city were hoping to hire people like you. For another 82._________
reason, I think it will be very much more convenient 83._________
for you to look after parents as they are getting old. 84._________
Therefore, this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make 85._________
a right choice. Besides, I do hope to see you soon.
Regards,
Huaming