短文改错
短文中有10出语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、 每句不超过2个错误;
2、 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
3、 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream school starts at 8: 30 a.m. and ends at 3: 30 p.m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sitting by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._______
the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2. _______
Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3. _______
but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 4. _______
couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _______
about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6. _______
the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It 7. _______
isn't a good time to do that, dear. ’ At once I apologize 8. _______
controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _______
know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. ” 10. _______
It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much1. _______
I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my2. _______
first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my3. _______
poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for 4. _______
me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew 5. _______
that everything would be all right. There are many more happy 6. _______
memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly 7. _______
enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the 8. _______
changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the 9. _______
fishing trip. It was such much fun. 10. _______
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then 1. _______
in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home 2. _______
at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We 3. _______
had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, 4. _______
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. 5. _______
At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool 6. _______
or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat 7. _______
each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of us had any 8. _______
difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. 9. _______
It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories 10. _______
are as sweet as ever before.
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1. _______
hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2. _______
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3. _______
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4. _______
your collection of stamps are easy became they are everywhere. 5. _______
Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6. _______
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7. _______
the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8. _______
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9. _______
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10. _______
During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 1._______
words from these books, but I had terribly problems 2._______
memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 3._______
many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 4._______
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 5._______
a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 6._______
words from books that I read. I would come back from 7._______
school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 8._______
new words and added it to my collection. By the end 9._______
of last year,my collection has grown to 3,000 words. 10._______