假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tim,
I’m so excited and happy to hear that you’re coming to China．Since your trip is schedule for the middle of July，time is no a problem for me because I would be having my summer holiday at that time．
I’ve been very busy recent，for I’ve been prepared for the coming entrance exam，that is vital for me and my future life．Last week，I attended an English speech intending for high school students all over the province and I won first prize．Therefore，I’ve always dreamt of having the opportunity to travel in English-speaking countries like yours to practice and improve my English，as well make friends with people from other countries．
I am looking forward to seeing you．
Yours,
Li Hua
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个（√）；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改！
Yesterday I was invited to join in a 76．______________
old friend’s birthday party . The p
arty was going to 77．______________
begin on 8 o’clock in the evening .I was afraid of 78．______________
being late , so I lent a watch from my neighbor . When 79．______________
I got to there , my friend gave me a warm welcome . 80．______________
He introduced me for some other friends . After we 81．______________
shared the big birthday cake , we started dance and 82．______________
singing . What wonderful time we had ! On my way home 83．______________
I stopped to look at my watch —To my surprise that 84．______________
wasn't around my wrist any longer ! I hurried
back my friend’s house . Luckily I found it there . 85．______________
第Ⅱ卷
Part Three：Writing（two sections；full marks 35）
Section One：Error Correction（10 questions；1 for each，full marks 10）
本题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如此行无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列要求改正：
此行多一词，则把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，且也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词，则在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该词。
此行错一词，则在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
第一节：短文改错
We’ll never forget a day when76_______
my classmates and I paid a visit a77_______
chemistry factory. It was a large78_______
one with nearly 20 000 workers. It
looks like a garden and we saw col-79_______
orful flowers grass and trees there.
We also visited some workshop and80_______
found workers working hard. We
talked to them and learned a lot of81_______
We understood them further. On
the way home we felt very tiring, 82_______
but we both thought we had a very83________
good day. We really hoped what we84________
could get more chances of leaving
the school and learn about society.85________
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the 76. ______
platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77. _______
and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them 78. _______
growing up. I am always young when I was staying 79. _______
with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You 80. _______
have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges 81. _______
you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be 82. _______
friends with your pupils and take good care of him. 83. _______
Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84. _______
respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work
as very hard to make my dream come true.85. _______
第二卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分；满分l0分)
此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有—个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell everything about my future. Every 56. _______________
one of us is thinking about the future. Do you know what 57. _______________
yours is? I have decided to become a middle school teacher. 58. _______________
Does it sound surprised? I had this dream when I was only 59. _______________
a child. I love children. As we all can see, when teachers are 60. _______________
great needed in our country, especially in the countryside. Many 61. _______________
parents want their children to be well-educated, and they don’t 62. _______________
want them to be teachers. Perhaps one of the main reason is 63. _______________
that teachers work too hard but get too little. In spite that, I am 64. _______________
determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown. 65. _______________
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I’ll graduate from our school soon. How a 76. __________
great three – year school life! I just find this 77. __________
really difficult to say goodbye to the nice
teachers or my dear good friends. They are always 78. __________
kind for me and I will miss them forever. 79. __________
Walk around the campus. I can still see 80. __________
my footsteps through the colorful school life 81. __________
and everything will be careful kept in my 82. __________
memory. I’m going to study harder than ever
to improve my English. I believe you work 83. __________
hard, you’ll surely make a great progress. Let’s 84. __________
try to make your dreams come true together. 85. __________