假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As new students at an university in Boston, many of us were unfamiliar with the campus but frequently late for class.One professor, however, was absolute against being late, making clear that no excuse would be acceptable.So when a girl student came in his class one morning late, we expected the worst results.It left the professor so annoying that he demand the reason .“The reason is that my waiting online to buy your new book.” She replied very nervously.Delighted at being admired , the professor asked the rest of the class , “ Well , how were not the rest of you late?”
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the ![]() am in Friday evening. on |
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stop
across a whole country and that I wasn’t very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think it’d
be good for we all to live in a suburb (郊区) instead in the middle of a city. And Uncle Jeff, his
brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful
California it was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been
Dad’s job in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year.
Now we’ve been here for four years, and we all love it.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误,则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜
划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Animals are close friend of human beings.Their existence, _____
especially that the existence of rare animals,makes the whole ______
world lively and colorful.Unlucky, we have heard such news that _____
rare animals,even keeping in the zoo,can’t escape being hurt ______
and killed.You may wonder why this can happen.The reason_______
is that some people lacked understanding about these animals_____
and care little about them.
However, we should make information about rare animals_____
known to the public.Let’s keep on mind that protecting animals______
is duty of everyone.Meanwhile,we should take active and effective______
measures.After all,protecting animals are protecting ourselves.___
文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词;
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
例如:It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧ weekend with you. Luckily ![]() I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in am on Friday evening. |
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning. I’d like to
come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They were very old and unluckily
they are not in a good health recently. My mother has already made a telephone calling to them
and promised visit them with me this Saturday. My mother said we will stay at my grandparents’
the whole weekend. So I’m real sorry I can’t attend your party. I do hope you will understand all
this. Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and many happy returns of the day.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practice my oral English but learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that we can have a chance to practice the language. I seize every chance talk with them. However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say, and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning
Province in June, in 1965.When I was a child, I dreamed of flying
in the sky.I joined the army in June, 1983.In 1992, I was sent to
the air force base.In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members
from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination.I worked hardly,
because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998.
I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronautslater.
On Oct.15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled
around the earth about 14 circle and then returned .I was honored
to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space.