假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend，I helped my grandparents with their trip to the Dalian．On Saturday morning，together with my grandparents，I search the Internet for the train schedule，the weather in Dalian，and some hotel informations．In the afternoon，they went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue．After dinner，I packed the things into the suitcase，what my grandparents would need，such as clothes，glasses，an umbrella，a map．The next morning，I went to the station to show them off．Waved goodbye to them on the platform，I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.
短文改错（满分10分
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before．
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题：共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
John was visiting he 90-year-old grandpa, who lived in the country. In the first morning of the visit, John grandpa prepared a breakfast of bacon and eggs. John noticed some dirt on his plate, and asks, “Are these plate clean?” His grandpa replied, “They’re as cleaner as cold water can get them. Just go ahead and finish your meal.” For lunch, Grandpa made hamburgers. Again, John has found the plates were dirty, but he asked the same question. Without looking up, his grandpa gave same answer. Later, as John was left, his grandpa’s dog started to growl(咆哮), and wouldn’t let him pass. Grandpa shouted at the dog, “Cold Water, go lie down!”
第 II卷 (两部分，共35分)
第一部分：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，共10分）
This afternoon Li Hua was seated under a big tree, looked unhappy, I went up to ask that made him so unhappy. He told me that a classmate of his troubled him a lots. Sometimes when Li Hua was listening to attentively in class,the classmate patted him on his shoulder,that annoyed Li Hua. He talked about it with the classmate, but it doesn’t work. Not know how to solve the problem, he was wondering whether he should tell the teacher about it, I suggested that he turned to the teacher help, but he was afraid that if
he did so, the calssmate would hate him.
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题：共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分,满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。请按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其写面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词写出改正后的词。
注意：1.，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movie about a mother and h
er sons.When the child was a littleboy,his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a richfamily who had no child.The boy accepted a very good education and twenty years later became doctor.In his hospital, he had a patient,who was an old lady.He did care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening,thelady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed the doctor found a letter,in it he discovered the truth and felt the love of a greatmother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was
moved to tears.
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节: 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
短文中有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下方写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges
, you can never teach well. However, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.