短文改错
下文中共有10处语言错误,在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
On a Friday night, a poor young artist was playing with his violin at a street corner with a large piece of paper on the ground. Before long, he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat with mistake. Please come to claim them soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. Some time later, a man came and take back his lottery which won a prize of $500,000. When asked why he didn’t keep it for himself, artist said, “While I don’t have much money, I live happy. However, if I lose honest, I won’t be happy forever.”
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 1. _______
to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 2. _______
to London, and visit the British Museum and some 3. _______
parks. But I have spent lots my money, so I cannot 4. _______
even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 5. _______
Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your 6. _______
stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 7. _______
concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have 8. _______
some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 9. _______
to my own records, there are no need to spend money. 10. _______
All right. That' s what I' m going to do.
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
it seems always difficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 6. _______
don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei
Although the first computer was only introduced
to China in the mid-1950s, since then ,a number of computers 1._____
used in different fields has been grown rapidly. 2.______
Computers are now affected millions of people in countless ways 3.______
every day. They are used to predict the weather, examine the 4.______
ocean,and to develop defence systems. They depend more and more 5._____
heavy on computers. There is no reason to think that their use 6._____
will decrease.By the contrary ,they will develop more rapidly 7. ______
as you think.If you are among those who still don't know much 8.______
about computers, you will lost in the future.
9.______
You should learn what you can while you still have the chance
10.______
The others day, on his way back from school, Li Ming 1._____
found a strange-looked toy car lying on the grass. 2._____
Curiously, he picked it out and played with it. To his 3.______
great surprising, suddenly ,the toy became larger and larger . 4.______
Finally it changed into a real car .A moment Li Ming 5.______
got into the car ,from a speaker above coming a stranger’s 6._____
voice: “Please input your address on the screen in front of 7._____
you, and fastened your seat belt. You will go wherever 8._____
you like ”. As a boy full of adventures, Li Ming decided to 9._____
take a risk and try on this magic car …. 10.____
We have done a survey recently to find whom students will turn to 1.______
when they in trouble .The following are the results . 2.______
Most of students will go to their friends ,because 3.______
they are almost the same age and are able to 4.______
understand each other easy .Some students will tell 5.______
their parents or teachers about their troubles for the reason that they all 6.____
have too much experience that they can be trusted 7.___
by their kids and students. Only a few students 8______
prefer to solving the problemsall by themselves .They hate to talk with others 9______
and can’t get on well with others .As a result ,they have more friends . 10._____