短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
第二卷（非选择题共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节。满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分）
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down 1._____________
and hurt my foot.I was in greatly pain at that momet, 2.___________
but tried to act as if nothing has happened until the 3._____________
Class was over.. Though I had difficulty walk back to4.___________
my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused5____________
the offer of help of classmates. As result, the hurt6____________
in my foot became worse. Now I know I’m wrong. We7.___________
can tell others our need for help and accept his help. 8____________
Some day we can not help others in return.In this way,9 ___________
We can get along to each other happily and peacefully.10.__________
第Ⅱ卷 (非选择题，共20分)
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分20分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题0.5分，满分5分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(划掉，并在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Isabella is one of my best friends. She had taught 66.
us English when I attended training course two 67.
years before. Isabella always made good preparations 68.
for the lessons, she tried her best to make her 69.
classes lively. I used to being poor in English， 70.
especially in written English. But now, I'm able 71.
to write English letters and reports correct. 72.
I still remember how she helped me for my English 73.
patiently. Teachers’ Day is approached. I'm going to 74.
send to her a card and give her my best wishes. 75.
六、短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other. In the past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other in the telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
第三卷：写作（短文改错，写作）
Part five: Proof Reading (10 pts.)
请仔细阅读下列短文并改正其中的10个错误。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10个语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改的词均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high shchool students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon..
Yours,
Li Ming