短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Ʌ）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don't expect — like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn't work, call friend that you get on well, and let him or her help you.
（四）
The Huaihe River has been serious polluted. Day and night 76.______
millions of tons of waste water is being poured down to it from 77.______
hundreds of factories. The waste water is harmful. At present 78.______
there is no fish in it. The river water cannot be drunk. People in 79.______
either bank have to dig wells to take drinking water. The Huaihe 80.______
River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare swim 81.______
in it. Something must be done to stopping the pollution. The 82.______
government and the people near the river must try to clear water 83.______
as soon as possible. Now special attention has paid to the 84.______
pollution by the government and more scientists. The pollution 85.______
will be prevented in the near future.
（二）
Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost 76．_______
everyone likes watching TV. TV has become part of our lives. 77．_______
TV has many advantages, for example, it informs us the 78．_______
latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our 79．_______
eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 80．_______
about the world． But, it also has some disadvantages. People 81．______
waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 82．_______
and work are affected． To the children who they spend too 83．_______
much time in watching TV, it can do harmful to their sight 84．_______
and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV. 85．_______
（五）
Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. 76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me 80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______
can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study 83._______
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with 84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______
Best wishes,
Jane
（三）
A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76._______
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77._______
to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78._______
interested to begin studying another language. At the 79._______
first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______
exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81._______
each student would do their best to copy. When he got to 82._______
me, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83._______
finally asked him why. "I find it great fun," she explained 84._______
it. "In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time 85._______
I've heard an American speak French with a German accent."
答案与简析：
76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。
(一)
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76．_______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77．_______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78．_______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79．_______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80．_______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81．_______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82．_______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83．_______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84．_______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______