短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意；1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tom and Alice were both patient in a Mental Hospital. One day they were walking by the swimming pool of the hospital while Tom suddenly jumped into the deep end. He sank to the bottom. Alice promptly jumped in to save him with any hesitation. She swam to the bottom and pull him out. When the medical director became aware Alice’s heroic act, he immediate reviewed her file and called her into his office. “Alice, I have a good news and bad news for you. The good news is that you’re being discharged because since you were able to save the life of other patient, I think you’ve gained your senses. The bad news is that Tom, that you saved, hanged himself with his bathrobe（浴衣）belt in the bathroom, and he was dead.”
Alice replied, “He didn’t hang him. I hung him up to dry.”
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to 76. _____________
travel with their friends, while I chose to take part-time job 77._____________
to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my 78._____________
teacher that a nearby company was looking after students 79._____________
with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope. The 80._____________
pay were 10 cents per envelope. I headed for the company, 81._____________
feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours 82.____________
and to earn the money. Actually, I only finished 200. Now, I 83._____________
fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out 84._____________
of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all. 85._____________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断;如无错误,在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。原行没有错的不要改。
As we know, our country suffer heavy snow last 76. _________
Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavily 77. _________
snow, that made the buses, trains and planes stop. 78. _________
Million of people couldn't go home. Many people 79. _________
suffered trouble. There were no food, water or light in 80. _________
some places. Our government called on people to fight 81. _________
against the heavy snow. As a student, I think they should 82. _________
learn from that the heroes. We must study hard at school. 83. ________
We should learn all kinds knowledge to make our 84. _________
motherland strong, better and richer. 85. _________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
Our school has required us to get several minutes earlier76．_________
so that we could spend a little minutes every morning exercising． 77．_________
This is to encourage the students form healthy lifestyles．78．_________
Some are against it, because they believe that it is very good for 79．_________
their health; however, others are against it and said they need80．________
more sleep．To my opinion, we should overcome our difficulties 81．________
to do what the school asks．Early to bed and early to rise 82．________
makes a person healthy, wealthy and wisely．Students can keep fit 83．_________
by doing exercise but gain more energy to perform better in class． 84．_________
This can also help students form healthy lifestyles．
Therefore, it is good idea that students exercise every morning．85．________
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
If someone asks you how you can make you always 76. ________
happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him 77. ________
a proper answer．Did you remember the old saying“No 78. ________
human being can really happy who is not giving or trying 79. ________
to give happiness to others”? If you will always think of 80. ________
taking more from others and give them less，you won’t be 81. ________
able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich.82. ________
Here’s an article for you. If each of you follow it, there 83. ________
will be all end of many unhappy days of yours．So you should 84. ________
learn to give up your own interests when necessarily to do so. 85. ________
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
答题要求：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive (敏感) topic. 76. ______________
No one can live with money in modern society. People77. ______________
have different opinions on them. Some people think one should 78. ______________
live to make money, and others, make money to live. 79. ______________
In my opinion, the latter (后一种) view may be much reasonable. 80. ______________
We should not be the slaves of money. Although money 81. ______________
means a lot of in our life, it does not mean everything. We 82. ______________
cannot exchange (交换) it friendship or love. Money indeed can 83. ______________
make a person enjoy his life for a while but all his life. 84. ______________
In a word, money is something but not anything. 85. ______________