假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smile is a magic language that everyone can easily understand whenever he or she comes from.Smile is as the golden sunshine that brings warmth to people and makes him happy.Smile is shortest distance between people and it is a good way to show off friendliness to others.More important,smile conveyed a kind of positive energy to people.When you are happy,smile brightens your face.When you feel frustrating,you should also smile to cheer yourself up.Smile can give you confidences and make you strong.Smiling at the world and the world will smile back!
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)此题要求改正所给短文的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
  2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
 Helen was a twenty-years-old girl. She has never had a job before. Now she wanted to get a work. So she went to meet Mr. Black, the manager of hotel. Mr. Black told her it was getting very busy in the hotel at the evening. He ask her if she was interesting in a part-time job. The girl said that she did. Then Mr. Black said she had to work very fast and that she must be there at six every afternoon and work from six to ten, from Monday to Friday. He offered her with 4.5 dollars an hour. Hellen pleased with the offer and decided to start work the next day.
文中共有10处错误.每句中最多两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
 增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
 In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard 
 University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer 
 software. As an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be 
 crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme i
nterested in foreign cultures or customs. 
 To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As 
 a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
 增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 
 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
 Dear friends, 
 It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
Jim and Mary were both patiences in a Mental Hospital. One day because they were walking by the hospital swimming pool, Jim suddenly jumped into the deep end. He sank to the bottom. Mary promptly, jumped in save him. She swam to the bottom and pulled Jim out.
  When the medical director became aware at Mary heroic act he immediately reviewed her file and called her into his office. “Mary, I have a good news and bad news. The good news is you’re being discharged because since you were able to jump in and save the life of other patient, I think you’ve regained your senses. The bad news is Jim, the patient you saved him, hung himself with his bathrobe belt in the bathroom, he is died.”
  Mary replied, “He didn’t hang himself, I hang him up to dry.”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:
 如无错误,该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
 注意:原行没有错的不要改。
 My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital
 with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other_______
 day when he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches_______
 where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble._______
 But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable______
 room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read._______
 Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take_______
 him lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time______
 from school because he is busy study what he has______
 missed in class. The doctor says he is recovering fast than______
 expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks.______