假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families.In order to make surely all of us are in good health,and she makes specific plans for us.For example,every morning,my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple.My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples.I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things,we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food.Understanding her good intentions,I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
第Ⅱ卷 (共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节。满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边的横线上划(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
One day a doctor was starting his morning works. Suddenly 76 _______
a man ran his room. His face was red and he could 77 _______
only say“Quick! Quick!”The doctor thought he can be 78_______
very ill. His assistant helped to get the poor man sit in 79_______
a chair. The doctor gave the man some medicine to make 80 _______
him to sleep. Then he looked into the man's mouth and 81_______
pulled out all the bad tooths. As soon as the man woke 82_______
up, he said“Quick, doctor, Quick,”with a low voice. 83 _______
“It's all over now,”the doctor told him.“You don't understand,” 84_______
said the man.“I came to tell you your house is on the fire.” 85_______
Ⅶ.短文改错(每小题1.5分,共15分)
When tea and coffee were introduced to Europe in 18 th 1.
century, people thought they were harmful. But the King of 2.
Swede decided to find out whether it was true .It was 3.
happened that there had two brothers in prison 4.
at the time. The King ordered one of them drink tea 5.
every day and the other coffee. Both of them have lived 6.
many years with no problem. At the end the one who 7.
drink coffee every day died at the age of 83 and the 8.
other lived even long. Because of this, Swede is 9.
one of the countries which much tea and coffee are drunk today. 10.
第二卷
第四部分写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一题做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划对(√)如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下面情况改正:
此行多一词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词:在错词的下面划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原文没有错误不要改。
Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d 76. _________
like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77. _________
just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, 78. _________
since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79. _________
hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80. _________
to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 81. _________
may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82. _________
as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83. _________
So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 84. _________
was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85. _________
locked. I realized that moment. It was Sunday.
Ⅶ.短文改错(每小题1.5分,共15分)
When tea and coffee were introduced to Europe in 18 th 1.
century, people thought they were harmful. But the King of 2.
Swede decided to find out whether it was true .It was 3.
happened that there had two brothers in prison 4.
at the time. The King ordered one of them drink tea 5.
every day and the other coffee. Both of them have lived 6.
many years with no problem. At the end the one who 7.
drink coffee every day died at the age of 83 and the 8.
other lived even long. Because of this, Swede is 9.
one of the countries which much tea and coffee are drunk today. 10.
五、写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Li Ming,
I have received your letter just now. Don't worry about me. 76.______
I'm getting on well with my research works in the lab. But, 77.______
to my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. 78.______
The reason is that you have not done well in it recent 79.______
and you have lost interesting, I'm afraid I can't agree with 80.______
you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English 81.______
is widely used in the world today and it will be important 82.______
tool in your future work.Except, it is becoming more 83.______
and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, and 84.______
you will succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there 85.______
is a way, I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours LiuDong