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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作㈩判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写㈩该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写㈩该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写㈩改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. Recently I find more and more difficult to 76.
communicate with our parents on some questions. For example, 77.
I do want to have a relaxing summer vacation, and they want to 78.
send me to some training class. I want to find a part-time job, 79.
but they say I was too young. What's more, they think I can't do 80.
the hard work. I want to do a social survey, but they say that it 81.
is actually waste of time. I am feeling helpless. Would you like 82.
to give me some advice on what is to do with this? I would appreciate 83.
it that I could get your help. I'm sure, with your help, I call solve 84.
these problems easily. I'm looking forward to hear from you soon. 85.
Yours, Li Hua

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ˆ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr. Black,
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I
have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English
learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my
grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much
that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy with preparing for my examinations at
present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
Li Ying

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ˆ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I attended a meeting holding by our school. At the meeting more than thirty students
praised. For our happiness, Bruce, monitor of our class, who was among them. We all felt
proud of him. Then the headmaster gave them a talk. He wanted us to learn these model
students and hoped that more and more students will be praised at the next school meeting.
I was great encouraged and make up my mind to work harder. Next week there will be an
English exam. I’ll try to get good mark.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Working in a international company in New York, Bill used 56.
to go to the barber's during working hours to have his hair 57.
cut, which, of course, against the rule: Office workers had to 58.
have their hair cut in their own times. While Bill was at 59.
the barber's one day, the manager came in by the accident to 60.
have his own hair cut. Bill tried to hide his face immediate 61.
he saw the manager, but the manager recognized himself. When 62.
asking why he was having his hair cut in office time, 63.
Bill said calmly, “It grows in office time.” “No all of it,” 64.
said the manager. “Some of it grow in your own time.” 65.
“But I am not having it all cut off.” Bill replied.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加: 在所缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分.

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It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.