第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35-优题课

第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Julia,
You said in your letter that you are always trying to improve 76．
your English, and your English teacher didn’t appear to appreciate 77．
your efforts．So you felt disappointing and lost the desire to learn 78．
English．You know teachers are very busy and maybe your teacher 79．
is struggled to provide personal attention for all the students 80．
in their class．In my opinion, it is a fact of life that sometimes 81．
people’s hard work went unnoticed．Though it is nice to receive 82．
encouragement and support, parts of growing up is learning to be 83．
motivated and study independently．So keep on to working hard 84．
at your English because you stop, you are sure to fail． 85．
Yours,
Li Hua

短文改错（满分10分
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before．

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题：共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
John was visiting he 90-year-old grandpa, who lived in the country. In the first morning of the visit, John grandpa prepared a breakfast of bacon and eggs. John noticed some dirt on his plate, and asks, “Are these plate clean?” His grandpa replied, “They’re as cleaner as cold water can get them. Just go ahead and finish your meal.” For lunch, Grandpa made hamburgers. Again, John has found the plates were dirty, but he asked the same question. Without looking up, his grandpa gave same answer. Later, as John was left, his grandpa’s dog started to growl(咆哮), and wouldn’t let him pass. Grandpa shouted at the dog, “Cold Water, go lie down!”

第 II卷 (两部分，共35分)
第一部分：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，共10分）
This afternoon Li Hua was seated under a big tree, looked unhappy, I went up to ask that made him so unhappy. He told me that a classmate of his troubled him a lots. Sometimes when Li Hua was listening to attentively in class,the classmate patted him on his shoulder,that annoyed Li Hua. He talked about it with the classmate, but it doesn’t work. Not know how to solve the problem, he was wondering whether he should tell the teacher about it, I suggested that he turned to the teacher help, but he was afraid that if he did so, the calssmate would hate him.

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题：共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分,满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。请按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其写面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词写出改正后的词。
注意：1.，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons.When the child was a littleboy,his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a richfamily who had no child.The boy accepted a very good education and twenty years later became doctor.In his hospital, he had a patient,who was an old lady.He did care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening,thelady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed the doctor found a letter,in it he discovered the truth and felt the love of a greatmother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was
moved to tears.