写作（共三节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The school sports meeting took the place on November 2. More than a thousand students competed for over 50 events. These students have been preparing for the sports meeting for weeks but they hoped to perform well in this grand competition. After the wonderful opened ceremony , the competition time arrived. A lot of student were so excited that they gathered in a certain area , cheered for the players. When they saw my classmates , they started shouting at the top of their voice. The sports meeting was lasted until November 4. It was great success .
We have done a survey recently to find whom students will turn to 1.______
when they in trouble .The following are the results . 2.______
Most of students will go to their friends ,because 3.______
they are almost the same age and are able to 4.______
understand each other easy .Some students will tell 5.______
their parents or teachers about their troubles for the reason that they all 6.____
have too much experience that they can be trusted 7.___
by their kids and students. Only a few students 8______
prefer to solving the problemsall by themselves .They hate to talk with others 9______
and can’t get on well with others .As a result ,they have more friends . 10._____
Should students make friends on line?some people think the Internet help make 1.______
many friends .Chatting online ,students can express his feelings 2.______
and opinions more freely ,and even get help at their foreign 3.______
language studies Others ,therefore ,think students should not . 4.______
They say making friends online is waste of time ,5.______
which should be spent more meaningfully on study . 6.______
Besides ,some students get cheat on line . 7.______
It is my opinion whether students should place their study，8.______
health and safe before other things .9.______
After all ,we can find friend in our classmates.10.______
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 1.______
of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2.______
than three months before I graduate middle school. At 3.______
the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4.______
take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5.______
Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6.______
only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 7.______
my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8.______
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 9.______
will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10._____
Dear Sir,
I am university student．I once thought life at the 76．_________
university must be excellent, but now I had changed my mind． 77．_________
I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move 78．_________
into the dormitory．Last term, I got along peacefully and 79．_________
happy．But I find they are not willing to be with me now． 80．_________
They don’t talk with me, so they’ve become cold toward 81．_________
me．Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what 82．_________
I felt like, but I failed to find an opening．When leaving 83．_________
alone, I am always recall this sadness．Why can’t I win true 84．_________
friendship? I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon． 85．_________
Yours,
Peter
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell you everything about my future．Every one 76．
of us is thinking about the future．Do you know what 77．
yours is? I have decided to become a middle school teacher． 78．
Does it sound surprised? I had this dream when I was only a 79．
child．I love children．As we all know, when teachers are 80．
great needed in our country, especially in the countryside． 81．
Many parents expect their children to be well-educated, and 82．
they don’t want them to be teachers．One of the main reason 83．
is that teachers work too hard but get too little．In spite that, 84．
I’m determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown． 85．