写作(共三节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The school sports meeting took the place on November 2. More than a thousand students competed for over 50 events. These students have been preparing for the sports meeting for weeks but they hoped to perform well in this grand competition. After the wonderful opened ceremony , the competition time arrived. A lot of student were so excited that they gathered in a certain area , cheered for the players. When they saw my classmates , they started shouting at the top of their voice. The sports meeting was lasted until November 4. It was great success .
Nuli told us what he wanted to be a scientist when he 1.
was in his childhood.He worked hard at all his lesson 2.
and tried to enter into a famous university in China, 3.
but he failed because the Cultural Revolution,which 4.
forced him to make a living at the age of 16.He serves 5.
as a farmer then a worker,but he spent his spare 6.
time studied and was finally admitted into a local college. 7.
He often says,“Young guys,do not lose the heart 8.
when you are in trouble.Believe in yourself forever, 9.
so you will surely make great progress sooner or later.” 10.
The alarm was first gone off on the third floor. 1.
People left the building hurriedly but in a orderly manner. 2.
They came out carry their shopping bags and their parcels, 3.
some not properly wrapped and some not even paid. 4.
Most passer by waited in the street to watch.Many of the 5.
shops and offices in the street had just closed.Mr Clement, 6.
the officer in charge of,ordered all hoses(软管) 7.
to turned to the roof of the main building.People were pushed 8.
back from the area of their own safety.Seven officers 9.
entered the basement or were driven back within minutes. 10.
Hurriedly they put on their masks(防毒面具),ready to try again.
Dear Xiaohua,
It is four days since Mother accepted the operation. 1.
She is feeling much more better.The doctors told me 2.
the operation was successful,but because her old age 3.
she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks.The 4.
doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to 5.
do so.We expect to get a full report in two and three 6.
days.Please tell the good news to the rest of family 7.
as fast as possible.You needn’t come here.I’m 8.
able to look after Mother by myself.You’d better 9.
send flowers to Mother.She will feel happily. 10.
Yours,
Xiaohui
Before I went to senior middle school,some peoples told 1.
me,“A life of senior middle school is unforgettable.” 2.
While I first entered my senior middle school,everything 3.
seemed unpleasant.Face all the strange things around me, 4.
I often miss my old friends and classmates.I didn’t want 5.
to talk others or make friends with others.Little by little,my 6.
school record went from bad to worse,especially my 7.
maths.I couldn’t even pass the exam.I lost the heart and 8.
missed the happy times all day long.I told me,“I don’t 9.
belong to it.I don’t like the life here.” 10.
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
I want to thank you again for having me in your home for the
summer holidays.I had always wanted to return the village after 1.
moving away and it is really great to see most of my old friends again. 2.
I told mother,father,sister,and all my friends here that a great 3.
time I had.I’ll never forget the steamboat ride.I never knew about 4.
a ride down a river could be so excited.I also enjoyed the 5.
evening when we spent together.And I can’t forget the good food 6.
you cooked for me.It was wonderful.I hope that you two can come 7.
and visit us sometime soon.Father and mother will love to see you. 8.
Maybe you could come during a winter holidays.Uncle Ben will also 9.
go back for Christmas.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderful time together. 10.
With best wishes.
Yours truly,
Tom