Ⅶ、短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)DearR-优题课

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共40分）
第三部分：写作（共二节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m a senior 3 student who take the College Entrance Exam soon．Now I have a problem in choosing my major．My parents want me to study international business．Therefore，my head teacher suggests that I chose software engineering．As for me，I have a total different idea from them．I want to take environmental science for my major so that I can use that I have learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation．But can I possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher? I’m writing to you for my opinion．Would you please spare some time to give me some advices?

第二卷（共40分）
第一部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning!
Today , my topic is the valuable of time. Time, like the proverb says, is money. This means that if our time is good employed, it will turn out a lot of useful and important piece of work when the proper opportunity come. Although all time is precious, but the time of our childhood and of our youth is more precious than any period of our existence because those are the periods which we can acquire knowledge and develop our abilities. If we allow these morning hours to slip away, we shall never able to make up for the loss.
Let those who think nothing of waste time remember this. Thank you for your listening!

第II卷（共40分）
第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节.短文改错（共1题，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给的短文中的10处错误。要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该词下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处, 多该不计分。
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English．One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words．

第Ⅱ卷(非选择题，共22分)
第三部分：写作(共二节，满分22分)
第一节：短文改错(满分5分)
Dear Grace,
It is naturally that you don’t feel happy when you failed the mid-term examination. Though you failed the exam two months ago, you should have confidence in yourselves and felt relaxed so that you can do better in the coming exams. The reason why you feel too tiring to study may be because you are not confident. What you must do now are to organize your time well and be sure of yourself. Don’t work too late or too hardly. In this way you are more likely to get tired. If you miss your good days with your classmates, talking to your classmates about your worries. I’m sure they are willing to help me out no matter how busy they are.
Best wishes!
Editor

第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I didn’t go to school yesterday. It was such a beautifully day that I took a bus to the seaside and I cost all day on the beach with some of mine friends.We had wonderful time.We drank coca and eat ice cream until we had no more money.I couldn’t call my parents to ask help but I don’t want to walk home,so I sold my shoe in the market and came back in bus.What a fun it was!