(2011·陕西卷)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(__),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划上一个(P);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一漏字符号(Λ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下面划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Last Saturday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper. On my wayto the cinema, we happen to meet an Americannamed Peter, who had lost his way, looked worried.When he told us that he wasn't able to findthe hotel, we decided take him there. When we wentto the hotel, we told of Peter the great changesthat had taken place in our country in the past few year, and he told us a lot of things about the youths in the U.S.A.Although my brother and I missed a interestingfilm, we felt very happily, for we had not only helpedPeter out of trouble and also learnt something from him.
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There are so much road accidents every day.They are often caused by carelessness. But thereare many rules that help to make the road safety.Here are some rules what we ought to know: In Hong Kongtraffic keeps to the left. Before across theroad, we must stop or look at both sides. Lookright; look left and look right again. If roadis clear, it is safe cross the road. Ifwe saw small children or very old persons,or blind people waited to cross the road, wecan help them to cross the road safely.
Do you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’dlike to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Everything just went wrongly. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt myhand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the houseto catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, youmay laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scaredas well because teacher hates the students coming late to school.So I ran three miles to school only to found that nobodywas there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom waslocked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday
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Two years ago my friend Lisa bought expensive mountain bike,that I liked very much. So she tried to persuade me to buy one,but I can’t afford it. From then on,I had been dreaming aboutbuy one. A week ago, my dream finallywas came true. Then Lisa and I were determined totake a great bike trip.It was the Mekong River where we wanted tocycle along. Lisa was stubborn. Although shedidn’t know the best way getting to places ,she insisted thatwe began our journey from the source of theRiver.I know Lisa well. Once she has made up her mind, something canchange it.Finally, I had to give in.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My hometown is a small village. Small as it is, but it’s very beautiful.
There are a number of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we fly kites are made by themselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer, the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Beside, the wild apples are nice to eating. In autumn, corns at the foot of the hills were ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and make snowmen.
In my hometown there are blue sky, fresh air, sweet water and kind people. I love my hometown!