第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35 分）
第一节：短文改错（共10 小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack of self-confidence．You should smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
短文改错（满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I'm glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was
born in July 15, 1974, in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and
chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he
entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four year of hard work
there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his
excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is
now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I
will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
Looking forward to receive your early reply
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing had happened until the class is over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmate. As the result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong. We can tell other our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along with each other happy and peacefully.
短文改错 （共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
单句改错（共10小题，每小题1 分，共计10分） Dad is coming back from abroad. What presents do you think will he bring to us? 1. __________
He mustn’t have gone far, because his coat is still here on his chair. 2. __________
According to a widely accepted theory, the universe began with a “Big Bang” that threw matters in all directions. 3. ___________
We are advised to wear sunglasses to prevent our eyes from the strong sunlight. 4. ___________
We won’t have Jim get away with cheating in the exam. 5. ___________
I have told him about the get-together but if he will come I don’t know. 6. ___________
He told us that it would be a great chance to build our bodies and we would have a wonderful time in it. 7. __________
Dressed in a bright red dress, she was easy to be picked out in the big crowd. 8. __________
She said that she might not come, so it is no point waiting for her here. 9. __________
After they moved in, she decided to change the curtains because they did not fit the wall and the furniture. 10. __________