第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Julia,
You said in your letter that you are always trying to improve 76. _______________
your English, and your English teacher didn’t appear to appreciate 77. _______________
your efforts. So you felt disappointing and lost the desire to learn 78. ______________
English. You know teachers are very busy and maybe your teacher 79._______________
is struggled to provide personal attention for all the students 80._______________
in their class. In my opinion, it is a fact of life that sometimes 81._______________
people’s hard work went unnoticed. Though it is nice to receive 82._______________
encouragement and support, parts of growing up is learning to be 83._______________
motivated and study independently. So keep on to working hard 84._______________
at your English because you stop, you are sure to fail. 85._______________
Yours,
Li Hua
下面短文中有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going. I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparations to make. Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边的横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
| When our six children were total young, suppertime was always |
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| being interrupted by neighborhood children ring the bell. |
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| They wanted one child or another to come out and played. |
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| Finally we had good idea. We hung a sign on the front |
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| door that was read: “We’re having dinner. Come back |
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| later.” That night, we sat down to what they thought would |
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| be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals. But as soon as we |
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| began dinner, the doorbell rang. On the front door stood a |
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| five-year- old boy from across the street. He looked up |
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| at us and said, “I just want to know which the sign says.” |
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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错——个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When we talk about city life, we’ll think tall________
buildings, busy streets and comfortable live___
conditions. Besides, there is much pollution in_____
the city now. People have to put up with noisy_______
and harmful smoke. How about country life? The_______
first feelings come into our minds are peace and quiet.___
We can enjoy the blue sky, golden crop and fresh air._____
But life in the country is not so easy as it in the city._____
In my opinion, if we pay attention to protect the_
environment and developing the country, and we’ll enjoy_____
a modern and peaceful life.
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改8处，多者（从第9处起）不计分。
| 例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily the  I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m.am in Friday evening. on |
Alice,
I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting in last week. My
father was very happy that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for
half a month, visiting place of interest and practicing my English as well. We’ve been writing to
each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed talking face to face with you. I hope
you’ll be on holiday yourself by that time and I can hard wait to see you!
Yours,
Lily
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you.
I win a national prize for painting last week.
My father was so pleasing that he suggested
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying
there for half a month, visiting place of interest
or practicing my English as well. we’ve been
writing to each for nearly a year now. I have
often dreamed of talk face-to-face with you.
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that
time. Perhaps we could go out to do some
sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily