第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Wise men don’t always act as wise 76.__________
as we think. At times they maybe do something silly, 77.__________
and then the stories about their foolish acts are still 78.__________
widely talked throughout the world in modern times. 79.__________
For example, Beethoven was said to having insisted on 80.__________
paying a waiter in a restaurant for a dinner he has not 81.__________
eaten or ever ordered; the British physicist Newton, while lives 82.__________
in London, cut two holes in the door, one big, other small, 83.__________
so as for his two cats to pass by. He only thought the 84.__________
bigger cat couldn’t get through the smaller holes easily. 85.__________
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.
I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.
In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Climbing is my most favourite sport. I am very fond of it, especially in later autumn. One day early in the morning, my friends and I put on my sports shoes and start off. After climbing for half an hour, we got to the top of the mountain. There we had good view miles around. To the north, a big river crossed the city, on which there were many ships sail busily. A lot of beautiful trees was there, too. The sun started to go down, for it was time for us to go back. In the way back, we were laughing and talking all the time. We had a good time on that day.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thought about the question raised in your letter. In my opinion, you should go back after you finish your studies at abroad. For one thing, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For another, I think it will be more convenient for you look after your parents because they are getting older and older. And this is only my point of view. It is up to me to make a right choice.
对每一小题作出判断，按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。Give one more minute, I can finish the tough work.
Eddie Redmayne together with other actors were nominated（提名）for the Academy Award for Best Actor in 2015.
We were deep moved by the movie The Theory of Everything, which is about a famous scientist.
Because what you had said to your friends, they decided to teach you a good lesson.
When I entered into the yard, I found a cat lying on the ground with its eyes closed.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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It is a long time since you come to Beijing to learn Chinese. How are you getting along well with your study? I’m eager to know if you are used to live in Beijing or not. There is going to have an English speech contest in Beijing in July. It’s such important for me that I want to do it well. Therefore, I have some trouble in collecting information I need. That also puzzles me is how to put what I have learned into practice. I know you have good command of English. Would you please do me a favor? I’d appreciate you if you can give me some advice on how to solve these problems.