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In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it. The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careless when crossing the street.
The early morning fire damaged the historic Gallad House today. It destroyed the third floor of the building so fire fighters saved the first and the second floors. There were only a few elderly people live in the building at the time and they carried out to safety. The Gallad House was built in 1718 and was used for a hotel for over 150 years. George Washington stayed in here in 12. The Gallad family owned the building for the elderly. Several fire department were called to the scene. When Fire Chief Andrew Bond asked when the fire started, he answered that perhaps a burning cigarette caused it. Chief Bond had promised to further examine the cause.
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you that our school has been worked out a new program.
The purposes of the program is to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresh, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. According to program, we will plant different kind of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school. A botanical garden will be building. Besides, we are to build a small garden in it, we can do any reading and take a rest. What’s more, some statues of famous people will be set up encourage us to work harder. Don’t you think the program wonderfully?
I'd like to tell you something more about the problem of pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory besides our school gives off heavy smoke all day long. Very loud voices hurt our ears. Rubbish and waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out polluting water and poisonous gas. All this has made a great harm to the health and study of the teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little has done to change the situation. I don't think we could study well unless the problem is solved. We do hope you'll help and support us.
My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live with us for many years of independence. We did all the things we could make her feel comfortable, in our home, including giving her the private telephone line for their bedroom One evening we were having a party while the phone rang. It was a telephone operator, who asked, “Do you have a grandmother on upstairs? “Yes, what was happened?” my husband replied. “Well,” the operator again continued, “She can't remember your phone number, and she like a cup of tea.”
A US-led War against Iraq broke out in March 20, 2003 without the agreement of the UN. They came less than two hours after Bush's deadline for Saddam leave his country has passed. There are about 250,000 US armies around Iraq. There are also armies from another countries, includes Britain and Australia, fighting with the American soldiers. Their force is much more bigger than that of Iraq. But they met strong resistance than they expected. “These things are never easy. There will have some difficult times ahead so the War is going on as its plan,” said British Prime Minister Blair.