第四部分 写作（共两节，满分50分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题：第小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you. 71.
I win a national prize for painting last week. 72.
My father was so pleasing that he suggested 73.
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying 74.
there for half a month, visiting place of interest 75.
or practicing my English as well. We’ve been 76.
writing to each for nearly a year now. I have 77.
often dreamed of talk face to face with you. 78.
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that 79.
time. Perhaps we could go out to do some 80.
sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We receive your application last week. We regret to inform you that our company has hired a boy calling Tonny the job of the manager assistant. Having studied your certificate careful, we decided that we should hire someone with more office experiences for this particular position. You have impressed them with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, but we do hope that you will apply for a position in our company sometime in the future. We would like to thank you on your being interested in our company. Please contact us as if there is further questions.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在其下面写出修改过的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Stanley and Frank are next door neighbor who study in the same class, so they walked together to and from school. Some day as they were walking home together, it sudden started to rain. Stanley quickly opened his umbrella and said, “My mother surely have foresight. She said on this morning it would rain and told me to carry my umbrella with me.” Frank smiled and walked to him, said, “My mother has even great foresight. She told me not to carry an umbrella and as she knew you would certainly have with you. Don’t you agree?”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October.
We stayed in a small hotel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery.
We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.
下列每个句子中均有一处错误。请按要求将每个句子中的错误找出来并加以改正。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.每句只有一处错误。
3.不可改变原句意。The driver ,rather than the passengers are responsible for the accident.
Her brother suggested her to lose weight to keep fit.
Taxi fee was raised because the price of the oil was higher than before.
Much to our surprise, the old man survived from the big fire.
Suddenly the boys found themselves surrounding by some bad boys.
Actually, the manager you think highly is very mean and dishonest.
The waiter told us the meeting will be at the end in ten minutes.
The woman burst into tears for the moment she heard the news .
Though buried deeply down in the earth, the vase was kept well.
He is sure to come next month, which we’ll be free.
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have been taken place in our life.Taking my family for example. My parents keep in touch with others mainly by sending letters in the past. And now we make long-distance calls at home, Once my parents listened the radio for news and other informations. But now we get to know about the world .by watching TV or surfing the Internet. There is another big change. When my parents got marry about twenty years ago, they lived in a small room crowding with furniture. But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. On short, our life has become more comfortably and convenient.