假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的-优题课

Dear Ralph,
I'm a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. ＤBefore my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me.
Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn't seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?
Yours,
Xiao Wei

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾，如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的请不要改。
Next week I’m going to see my teacher who teaches me
.. __________
English in the middle school. She just completed thirty
.. __________
years of teaching and gained rich experience in his
. __________
work. What lively and interesting her classes were!
.. __________
The way she taught English impressed us great. I found
.. __________
I had great difficulty with English grammar the moment
. __________
I entered in the school. It was she who immediately
.__________
came to help. With her help, I made great progresses
. __________
in English. Once I even got first place in an English
. __________
examination. I owe my thank to her, my English teacher.
. __________

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Before I went to senior middle school,some peoples told me, “A life of senior middle school is unforgettable.” When I first entered into my senior middle school, anything seemed unpleasant. Facing all the strange things around me, I often miss my old friends and classmates. I didn’t want to talk others or make friend with others. Little by little, my school records went from bad to worse, especially my maths. I couldn’t even pass the exam. I lost my heart and missed the happy times all day long.I told me, “I don’t belong to it, but I hate the life here.”

此题要求你对一段文章改错。先对每一行作出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误），则按情况改错如下：
此行多一个词，把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
John was a very famous pianist. When he was a small boy,
he once played at a party at home of a rich man. . ______
He was only eight years old. And he had played the. ______
piano from several years. At the party, he played a .. ______
famous piece by Beethoven. He played wonderful.. ______
The famous piece had several very long rests. In.. ______
every of these rests he took his hands from the piano. ______
and waited. To him this was much more excited. But it .. ______
seemed as if the mother of the rich man thought. ______
differently. Finally, during one of these rests she went.______
over towards him. She touched him on his head with a .. ______
smile and said, “My boy, why don’t you play what you know well?”

第一节短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。
It was snowing heavily Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in the bus. Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. The driver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.