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第 Ⅱ 卷(共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾()；如果有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When people think about precious things, they usually
think about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 76. ___________
something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 77. ___________
a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live 78. ___________
near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 79. ___________
the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 80. ___________
young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 81. ___________
old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 82. ___________
their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 83. ___________
but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 84. ___________
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 85. ___________
下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分。
Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate. However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best for it. I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Recently a top school in Nanjing announced its new rules. One of them is that students are not allowed to watching Hunan TV at weekends. Instead, CCTV is recommended. Once knowing to the public, the rule set off a heated discussion among teachers, students and parents. Some are in favour for the school’s decision, believing that children need properly guidance and a good cultural environment during the course of growth. Besides, they should keep away from program that may mislead them or affect their studies. On other hand, some people hold the view that children’s right to choose our own lifestyle should be respected. I think bans of this kind isn’t practical for schools. Instead, students should be guided to choose what will benefit from them.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is Mother’s Day. I love Mother very much that I’ve done many things for her.
In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon as I returned to home. In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kind of vegetables and cooked a simple and delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made by myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I tell her to pay more attention to her healthy and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do many housework from today on. Hearing the words, Mother moved to tears.
Today is the special day, warm and meaningful.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying, “Time is money”, this shows the
important of time. When time has gone, it will never return back. It’s a pity when many
people make poorly use of time. They spend their precious time oversleeping, drinking and
traveling. They don’t realize wasting time is equal to waste part of their life. They always
regret having made little achievement so far. Therefore, we should form the habit valuing
time. Don’t put off that can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road of poverty and even death.
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it．She painted careful and her works were nice．She first painted only to please her, and then began to sell her works with a little money．In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop．He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less．Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists．Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101．