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VI.短文改错（共10 小题；每小题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词的地方加一个漏词符号（ ^ ）,并在其下面写出改加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（ / ）划掉.
修改: 在错的词下面划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I 
saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
When I was a child, I once went on camping with my family in summer. We decided to make a barbecue in a valley where lay in a beautiful mountain. So we collected some tree sticks to make the fire. My father ask me if I could try to make a fire. I was happier to take the job. Then I tried to set fire to the wood with a match, and produced only smoke. Then my father said, “That’s the right way. I’ll show you how to do it. First use the small piece of wood because they catch fire easy. Then put the larger ones on the top of them.” My father helped him make a big fire.
Last term before I got the message that two of my classmates will not attend our final discussion, I cried. Undoubtedly, I am an extreme anxious person.I feel nervous if anything on my schedule will not carried out.My personality has always bothered me a lot. One thing I would like to changing is my character.I attended the lecture a few week ago. The lecturer said a sentence that left an impression on me. “I feel strongly which I can make it.”From then on, I have regarded it for my motto. I encourage myself to become a positive person who will not to be beaten by any difficulties
Dear Maggie,
I’ve just realized I haven’t written to you for a month. How have you done with yourself since I last see you? In your last letter you said you were thinking of ask for a new job. I’d love to hear what was happened. I’d have phoned, but I may have lost your number. I remember writing it up somewhere and I haven’t been able to find them. Anyway, why I’m writing is tell you I’m having a party next Friday.Whether you’d like to come, I suggest you give me a ring and I’ll give you all the details. I hope you’ll be able to come and looking forward to hearing from you.
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Knowing how to do in case of fire is important. If a fire break out, what would you do? First, you should warn everyone in the building about the danger. Don’t panic or start shouting. Be calmly and act quickly. Second, you and all the others should be get out of the building. Don’t stop take anything with you. Once you are out of the building, stay out. Do not go back for some reason. Finally, when you are out of the building, calling the fire police. Don’t try to put off the fire yourself. That can be dangerous if you do.