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第三部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。
Many students are on the sports field take part in all kinds of sports. A ball game is going on among Class One and Class Two and no one knows who of them will win in the end. Do you see the student over there? Some young ones are practising the highly jump. One of them is a best high jumper in our school. He practises very hard every day because he wanted to break the school record. On this corner of the field, you can see another group of students. Their teacher is telling themselves how throw the spear. Our students love sports and they want to keep fit so as to serve for the people.
此题要求改正所给短文中的10处错误。请对每一行作出判断：如有错误，则按下列情况改正；（答题不规范的一律不给分）
多一个词：斜线（\）划掉。
缺一个词：在缺词处加一个加字符号（∧），并在下边写出该加的词。
错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行横线下写出改正后的词。
(考生全文改错按顺序计，只能改10处，从第11处改错起无任对否不计入阅卷范围。)
I am a Senior 1 student. I often quarrel with my parents over that I can watch TV before school.
My parents held the opinion that I should study hardly so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides, they consider this is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often, which is the chief cause of short sight. But in my view, it is TV that give me what I am interested. In addition, it may help relax my mind when I am tiring, in which case my study will be improved.
In the end, we reached a agreement. I am allowed to watch TV only at weekends. However, the programs are only news, sports and entertainment, but not TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me, because that I can at least have some time to enjoy some TV programs.
文中共有10个语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Behind my apartment, there is used to be a dirty and messy corner. Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees. Broken bottles were left laying here and there. There was a damaging car in the centre. The whole corner gave off a unpleasant smell. One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park. Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner. All the rubbish have been cleared away. Flowers and young trees have planted all over. Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life. It has taken on a new look.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者 (从11处起) 不计分。
Dear Mr Black,
I'm very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get more help from you in my English learning. And I'm afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I've promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request.
I'm busy with preparing for my examinations at present. I planned to visit you in winter if it's convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Ying
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Harvey had eight umbrellas but they were all broken. He decided have them repaired. He took theumbrellas to the shop and left them here. The shopkeeper said, "They'll be ready tomorrow." That evening Harvey went home from a office by bus. He sat next to an old woman. She had an umbrella on the floor between the seat. When the bus reached its stop, he picked up her umbrella and standing up. "Hey!" the woman said, "That umbrella belonged to me." "I'm so sorry." Harvey said, giving it to him. "Please excuse me by taking your umbrella by mistake." The next day he was collected the umbrellas and got on the bus and saw the same woman. As he sat down, she said, "You have certain had a successful day!"
(限时：20分钟)
Dear Mary,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundreds and twenty students took exams but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel lonely. They couldn't imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with us. Why can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?
Best Wishes
Jane