假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grasses and trees everywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them farther. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we have a very good day. We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.
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In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is
common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend,
or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when
Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for
her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not
have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great
effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
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An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive. But after many attempts, she pass her driving test and told her husband that，
to release， he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But then
a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，
it is all because of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have been practicing for three weeks now， but I still couldn’t get used to it, in fact,
I’ve nearly killed three peoples.”
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Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental pollution do great harm to living things and human beings. Now more and more people have realized what serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against pollution. We expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.
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Dear friends,
I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible but severe earthquake unexpected hit your hometown. Facing the rarely-seen disaster, we remain so calm and strong –willed that we are all moved to tear. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Think about your present situation, we can wait a minute to make every bit of effort to help you. I, as a chairman of the Students’ Union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincerely pity and care for you. Besides, we have made donation of 120,000 yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficult. A better hometown can rebuilt. Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help.
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Recently I read an article in a magazine. It was of a mother who was worried about his son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinions on the same thing. That is what is meaning by “ the generation gap”. We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old song while young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted, “Shut it off. It’s awful!” How can we deal the generation gap?