第五部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
As is known to all the world that 81．__________
other large earthquake broke out in China, and 82．__________
that YuShu laid in ruins. The Chinese government 83．__________
took quick action to carry the first aid. Firemen, 84．__________
soldiers, doctors, and volunteers reached in the 85．__________
frontier in no time. The local people too conducted 86．__________
self rescue at once. China is a great country who 87．__________
people are strong, brave and uniting. They will 88．__________
never say “give up” and “give in”. So Chinese 89．__________
are sure to beat the battle. Yushu will never fall down, 90．____________
And Qinghai will be forever green !
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者不计分。
Last Saturday,I put my wallet in the bag which was at back of my bike.I rode for about half an hour.As I neared my home I found that I kept the bag opening all the way.The wallet had fallen out somewhere in the way,it made me upset.Just then I received a phone call saying that my neighbor is waiting for me..Someone had sent it to my home.I felt very pleasing and I went home at once.It was turned out that I put my ID card in the wallet.No one was at home for he gave it to my neighbor.I have never found out what he was because he did not tell my neighbors his name when he left.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I bought new coat in a shop. When I came back home, I found
it so big for me . This morning, I went to the shopand change the coat I bought. But the sales girl in the shop treated me cold. Firstly, she didn’t admit why I bought the coat in her shop. Then,she saidI made it be dirty . So I got very angry but quarreled with him, pointing to the rules on the wall. Just then, a manager turned up. He said sorryto me and they changed other one for me . At last, I said goodbye to them and took the new coat home.
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear peter,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a famous school with long history. We have many experiencing teachers and excellent equipments. There are two teach buildings. One is for seniors and the other is for juniors. There is two lab buildings and a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and chemistry, We have some electives(选修课).The students can choose what they like attend. We love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mrs. Black was having a lot of trouble with her skin, so she went to see her doctor and had some test. The next day the doctor telephoned her to give her the list of things she should not eat. Mrs. Black careful wrote all the things down a piece of paper, which she then left it beside the telephone when she went out to a ladies’ meeting. When she got back home two hours late, she found her husband waiting for her. Carried a big basket full of food, she said, “Hello, dear. I’ve done all your shopping for you.” “Done all my shopping?” she asked in surprise, “But why did you know what I wanted?” “Well, when I got home, I found your shopping list beside the telephone,” answered her husband, “So I went down to the shop and bought everything you have written down.”
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Several American students visited our school. Upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to them, among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. I recognized Tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. Tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. When school was over, we took the subway home. My parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. The next day, I act as a guide, showing Tim along the most famous scenic spots in Beijing. Wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. The time to say goodbye came when we realized it. I gave Tim a kite as a souvenir.