第二卷
第三部分 写作（共两节, 满分50分）
第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1.5分。满分15分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Believe it or not, proper nervousness has its advantage. 66.___________
Like in sports events to make athletes to gain good results, it can also 67.___________
sharpen our mind, thus allow us to perform well in exams. 68.___________
However, too much nervousness can result from sleeplessness, 69.___________
harming our health. What’s worse, it can make our mind at loss. As a 70.___________
consequence, our mistakes increased in exams, and we may even fail 71.___________
to write any answers.
Several methods can be used to solve the problem above. Firstly, 72. ___________
review our lessons well, that can make us have more confidence and less 73. ___________
anxious. Secondly, take some deep breath to calm down at the beginning of 74. ___________
any exam. Last and not least, always keep this in mind: I’ve studied hard, so 75. ___________
I’m sure to do the best I can.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to raise the awareness of students’ protecting the environment, our school organized activity of visiting a photo exhibition about haze on January, 2015. None of us took part in it.
At the art gallery of our city, we enjoyed a lot of photos, reading captions and analyzed some related data. We were astonishing by the harm caused by haze. Meanwhile, we thought high of some works and admired the photographers’ skills. Additionally, we learned what to deal with haze.
For conclusion, the activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it make us to learn more about haze, it also made us awareness of the urgency of protecting our living environment. We all decided to take action to protect the environment.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Opinions are divided about if we should buy products promoted by stars. Some students say that they prefer to buy products promoted by stars because of most of the stars care about the quality of the product they are going to advertise.Besides, buying those products is a way to support the stars they like. However, other think what some stars really care is money but not the quality of the product when they make a advertisement.In addition, the product that a star advertises is not necessary suitable for everyone. To my opinion, we should be cool and sensible while chosen a product. The main aspect we are supposed consider /s not the advertisement or the star and the quality of the product and its real usefulness in our daily life.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下列短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用划线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1、每句不超过两个错误；
2、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When traveling to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. Fortunately, a well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office and took me there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. Because of I didn’t speak French well, I couldn’t talk with him very much. However, even we couldn’t talk, we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned what communication can take place without much actual language at all.
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two years ago, Mr. Smith taught myself English. He was friendly to us student. Though he was strict in the students, he was respected. However, he was always careful and forgot things, that brought him a lot of trouble. For example, once he was on the holiday by the sea and he forgot which hotel he was staying in. After dark, he didn’t know where stay for the night. It was his wife who find him under a big tree behind the hotel. Heard this experience, we all burst into laughter. Such are Mr. Smith, a man whom everyone looks up to.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Our school has had a survey on reading. It shows that 55 percent the students spend our time reading textbooks after the school. Only 10 percent enjoy read literature. Why are so many students unwilling to read serious works? According to the survey, they have no enough time because they have too many homework to do. Some complain that literary works are so thick that they have hardly enough patient to finish it. Others who only concentrates on how to get high scores simply admit that reading literature won’t help them at all with their exams. What’s more, some students show no interest in literature. In fact, books play important role in our life. Not only can reading make us relaxing, but also it can help us to learn customs and culture in the past and at present at home and abroad.