第三部分 写作(共两节, 满分50分)
第二节:短文改错(共10小题,每题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给段文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画出一个勾(√ );如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词;在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
My father woke me up one morning when I was 14, announced, 66.
“Get up.You are going with me to cut grass.” I felt proudly and 67.
excited because my father thought he was responsible enough 68.
to help him in his business.Still, that first day is very hard. 69.
Towards the evening, my father found some leaves I had 70.
missed cutting and pulled me aside.“Cut that section again or 71.
don’t make me tell you do it again.” The message was clear. 72.
Today I stress the important of doing a job right the first time. 73.
In every job I have held, I have learned something that helps me on 74.
my next job.If you work hard, you can learn from any job you do. 75.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,共15分)
下列短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用划线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、每句不超过两个错误;
2、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When traveling to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. Fortunately, a well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office and took me there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. Because of I didn’t speak French well, I couldn’t talk with him very much. However, even we couldn’t talk, we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned what communication can take place without much actual language at all.
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years ago, Mr. Smith taught myself English. He was friendly to us student. Though he was strict in the students, he was respected. However, he was always careful and forgot things, that brought him a lot of trouble. For example, once he was on the holiday by the sea and he forgot which hotel he was staying in. After dark, he didn’t know where stay for the night. It was his wife who find him under a big tree behind the hotel. Heard this experience, we all burst into laughter. Such are Mr. Smith, a man whom everyone looks up to.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一个横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
Our school has had a survey on reading. It shows that 55 percent the students spend our time reading textbooks after the school. Only 10 percent enjoy read literature. Why are so many students unwilling to read serious works? According to the survey, they have no enough time because they have too many homework to do. Some complain that literary works are so thick that they have hardly enough patient to finish it. Others who only concentrates on how to get high scores simply admit that reading literature won’t help them at all with their exams. What’s more, some students show no interest in literature. In fact, books play important role in our life. Not only can reading make us relaxing, but also it can help us to learn customs and culture in the past and at present at home and abroad.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Cheetahs(猎豹)are the fastlandcreatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? Theonlyanimal that comes close to the cheetah’s amazed speed is itsbestfavoritefood, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal that’s as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When an English traveler, who spent a few week in Sweden, was about to return to home, he found he had only enough money left to get a ticket to England. Since it was only two-day voyage, he believed he can get home without eating anything. He final bought a ticket with that little money and went to board the ship. He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place where people had his dinner when dinnertime came. Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. He then said, “Waiter, brings me the bill.” “Oh, meals are included in the ticket.” said the waiter.