I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,()并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I often dream of become a teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boy and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well. What’s more, you have to be friends with your students and take good care of him. Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am student now, I still work hard to make my dream to come true.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
One afternoon Jack is walking lonely down a river.It was very cold and on the river few boat could be seen. When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene.A boy fell out a boat and was struggling in water. Without think about himself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy.He was about to drag the boy to the river bank when he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge. One of them stared at Jack and said angry, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”
短文改错
It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High
School.Last Saturday,the class that I was on held a
get-together,which took us a long time prepare.It
was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody
and set a well time for all of us.We all enjoyed
this precious day greatly,remember the time we spent
together and the people they were familiar with.It was
a pity which some of us were not present as they had
gone abroad for further studies,but they called back
or sent greeting card from different places.
文中共10处错误。要求:加词:在缺词处加漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删词:在文中把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
改词:在错误的词下面划一横线,并在横线下写出修改后的词。
短文中共有10处语言错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉; 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
Dear Li Ming,
I received your letter last week. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well my research works in the lab. But to my surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, and you will succeed. Do remember: Where there is a will there is a way. I’m looking forward to hearing a good
news from you.
Yours, Tommy