第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分 写作（共两节；满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多与的词用（／）划掉，在该行的右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行错一个词：在错词下划一（－），在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Mr. Brown ,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 76_______
Before you came to teach us , I had not interest in 77_______
English .My pronunciation was terribly. I could 78_______
Only speak a few words. But one and half year later , 79_______
I now think English fun to learn . I got a lot from your 80_______
encouraging words. I will always remember what you 81_______
said , “ If you try to , you can be No. 1 !” I hope you’ve 82_______
had pleasant journey home and will come to China 83_______
again sometimes in the future. I will write again 84_______
and send you the photos we take together . 85_______
Yours sincerely ,
Li Min
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处。
Yesterday my family went to Nanchang because of my grandmother had a birthday.This year he is seventy years old.
In the morning we went there by car and then we went to the photo studio. There we all put down the clothes like the Tang Dynasty’s and take a family picture.
At noon, we entered a restaurant, and we each ordered the long life noodles and another foods that must be prepare. Then I began to congratulate my grandmother on her birthday. I wished my grandmother good healthy and long life. After our lunch, we came back.
How a wonderful day we had!
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Like many other places, our hometown is either facing the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people there have realized the importance of protection the natural environment. Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted
water into the rivers. The citizens no longer put waste, such as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year,a great number trees are planted. As a result,
the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner.The hills around the city were covered with green trees and the air there is much more fresher than before.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him.In our way to the cinema,we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying.We bought her a cake to stop her cry.When we asked she lived,she said she did not know.So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her.After that we went to the cinema.And when we got there,the movie was almost over.Although we missed the movie,but we felt very happy because we did a well deed.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I paid a visit to the Hong’en Temple Park with my friends. The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers. When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around, something unpleasant catch my eye. A young couple on the grass was eating, talking and laughing loudly even if they were the only people in the world. What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish onto the grass, ignoring the sign “No littering” nearby. What a shame!
So behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Hong’en Temple Park do as the young couples did, the park will be severely polluting and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think both of us should mind our behavior in the public places. Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
书面表达（共三节，满分30分）
第一节：单句改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Art is influenced by customs and faith of a people. Styles in Western art have changed many times.
Some of the first poetry a young child learns in English are nursery rhymes.
My first visit was a space station considered the most modern in space.
To prevent this from happening again, John Snow suggested that the source of all the water supplies examined.
Copernicus' theory is now the basis which all our ideas of the universe are built.
He did not want to be attacked by the Christian Church, so he only published it as he lay die in 1543.
It is an imaginary line divide the eastern and western halves of the world and is very useful for navigation.
Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.
With so many different forms of poetry to choose, students may eventually want to write poems of their own.
The second theory suggested that people should absorbed this disease into their bodies with their meals.