第四部分写作（共两节，满分20分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，满分5分）
| In order to go diving, you need some equipments. First divers carry their backs a metal bottle, which is filled of water. There’s enough air in it to last about 40 minutes. Next, divers carry heavy metal weights in a belt around its bodies. With these heavy weights they would float to the surface. You see, there are a lot of air in their air bottles, and this will bring them up to the surface if they didn’t have any more weights. Mostly divers don’t go very deep. |
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有2处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不算分.
It is interested to visit another country， but sometimes there are some questions if we don’t know the language very well． It may be difficult to talk about the people
there．We may not know how to use the telephone in the country which are visiting． We may not know what to buy the things we need． In a strange country, we may not know where to eat and what to order in a restaurant． It is not easy to decide how many money to tip（付小费） waiters or taxi drivers． When we were helpless， we may not know how to ask help．After a short time later， however， we learn what to do and what to say and we learn to enjoy life in another country.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a boy grown up in India，I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the stories my father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in1970s. My big moment finally come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to Europe, where my father was to attend for a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt was such nice that even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and thorough enjoyable，even someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like riding my bike．Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend．I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike．Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure．I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry．It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down．It can also be very dangerous．Of course I will be very carefully on my bike．In fact, accidents are not the only problem．Once I went to bookstore on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing．Now I have two strong lock．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
Mr. Smith is a traffic policeman, that works very hard. One day, Mr. Smith as well as his wife were taking a walk along the seashore. Suddenly he heard cry, “Help! Help!” Follow the direction of the cry, he saw a drowning man struggling in the water. Without hesitate, he threw off his coat, jumped into the waves, and swam to the man so fast as he could. Finally he was able to grasp the man by the arm and pulled him through the waves until he reached in the shore. His wife ran up to help the man. She was too exciting to say a word. All the people there crowd around Mr. Smith. They cheered him and raised them high in the air.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video
games. Many of them spend all their spare time the games, and some even stay at the game
machines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well as knowledge by
playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing after a day’s work and study, as video
games can bring a fun to people’s life. However, on the other hand, play video games too much
can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on people’s eyesight and healthy. So, video
games, like coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should make properly use of the
games.