假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出其修改后的词。
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years． It came sudden and went on for over three hours． After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest． The air was hotter, and all is quiet． Then a strong wind started to blow into my room． Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window． As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall． When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder． I tried very hard to close the window． Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of the house． When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened: a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
第二卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分；满分l0分)
此题要求改正所给文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有—个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell everything about my future. Every 56. _______________
one of us is thinking about the future. Do you know what 57. _______________
yours is? I have decided to become a middle school teacher. 58. _______________
Does it sound surprised? I had this dream when I was only 59. _______________
a child. I love children. As we all can see, when teachers are 60. _______________
great needed in our country, especially in the countryside. Many 61. _______________
parents want their children to be well-educated, and they don’t 62. _______________
want them to be teachers. Perhaps one of the main reason is 63. _______________
that teachers work too hard but get too little. In spite that, I am 64. _______________
determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown. 65. _______________
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I’ll graduate from our school soon. How a 76. __________
great three – year school life! I just find this 77. __________
really difficult to say goodbye to the nice
teachers or my dear good friends. They are always 78. __________
kind for me and I will miss them forever. 79. __________
Walk around the campus. I can still see 80. __________
my footsteps through the colorful school life 81. __________
and everything will be careful kept in my 82. __________
memory. I’m going to study harder than ever
to improve my English. I believe you work 83. __________
hard, you’ll surely make a great progress. Let’s 84. __________
try to make your dreams come true together. 85. __________
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _________
it has reached me. I am very glad to know that 77. _________
everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78. _________
Things here are same now as they were before. The 79. _________
final examination will take place in next week. So 80. _________
I am now busy preparing my lesson. It’s nice 81. _________
to think that the summer vacation was drawing 82. _________
near. I can’t say how many I want to see you all again. 83. _________
I am looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84. _________
Give my love to Father, Mother and someone at home. 85. _________
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week．
I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place 76________
in the countryside．Take my aunt’s family for example．We 77_______
supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and 78________
have over ten workers working for themselves．Their family’s 79_______
income reached as much 100 000 yuan last year．Not only 80______
did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford 81______
a trip abroad every year．When asking what else they needed 82______
most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that 83______
they could do business with foreigners directly．To their delighted, 84______
my cousin an use that he has learned from university to help 85_______
them with overseas trade．
第二卷写作
第四题：短文改错。（按格式去改，每题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Lily,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 76_____
party on Sunday. I’d like very much go but 77_____
I’ll have an examination in Monday morning. 78_____
It is very important but I can’t afford to fail 79_____
it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 80_____
and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that 81_____
I won’t be able to come this time. I hope you 82_____
can understand me. I’ll take this chance to wish 83_____
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 84_____
birthday, Lily, and many return of the day. 85_____