短文改错(共10 小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11 处起)不计分。
This morning Wang Hua and I went school on foot together. In the way Wang Hua saw Li Lin riding a bike on the other side of the street. He was too anxious to join Li Lin that he left me in a hurry and ran across the street in the front of a car. Luckily the driver stopped his car quickly. What dangerous! Wang Hua jumped onto Li Lin’s bike but they went on. But when they come to the school gate , they were knocked down by a car. We were both injured and sent to hospital immediately. Fortunately, they escaped being killed. We should draw a lesson from this accident and strict obey the traffic rule in everyday life.
(二)
Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost 76._______
everyone likes watching TV. TV has become part of our lives. 77._______
TV has many advantages, for example, it informs us the 78._______
latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our 79._______
eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 80._______
about the world. But, it also has some disadvantages. People 81.______
waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 82._______
and work are affected. To the children who they spend too 83._______
much time in watching TV, it can do harmful to their sight 84._______
and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV. 85._______
(五)
Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. 76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me 80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______
can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study 83._______
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with 84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______
Best wishes,
Jane
(三)
A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76._______
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77._______
to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78._______
interested to begin studying another language. At the 79._______
first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______
exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81._______
each student would do their best to copy. When he got to 82._______
me, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83._______
finally asked him why. "I find it great fun," she explained 84._______
it. "In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time 85._______
I've heard an American speak French with a German accent."
答案与简析:
76. famous前加上a。 (名词数)。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when,引导一个时间状语从句。(句子成分多分析) 79. them→us (逻辑错误须关注) 80. visiting→visited(非谓动词细辨别) 81. picture→pictures(名词数) 82. passes→passed(动词形) 83. 去掉down(习惯用法要记住) 84. and→but(but, and, or和so) 85. 去掉at(句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住)。
(一)
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76._______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77._______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78._______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79._______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80._______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81._______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82._______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83._______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84._______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85._______
下面是全国高考试题中的短文改错题。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 76. _____
Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____
Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____
the mountain, the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____
climbed the mountain, we ed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _____
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____
head touched the pillow.