六、短文改错（本题有8小题，每小题1分，共8分）
I'm middle school student. I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother. She is a doctor,
whom works very hard. She is strict with me, but she is too busy with her work that she found
little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, and I still feel a little of afraid of
her because she loses her temper easily. I don't know how to communicate with her. I hope we
can sit down and exchange our feeling and thoughts. I hope we can understand each other well.
What can I do?
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made hersuccess later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
此题要标出并改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个√；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ʌ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Every one of us can make a great efforts to_____
cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all _____
of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only _____
when we have a real need. That won’t be easy, I know _____
but we have to start anywhere. What’s more, we can go to _____
work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy _____
smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our _____
everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, _____
how many times have you walked our of a room and leave the _____
lights or television when no one else was there? _____
Animals are close friend of human beings.
Their existence_____
especially that the existence of rare animals,
makes the whole _____
world lively and colourful. Unlucky, we have
heard such news that _____
rare animals, even keeping in the zoo, can’t
escape being hurt_____
and killed. You may wonder how this can happen.
The reason _____
is that some people lacked understanding about
these animals and care little about them. _____
However, we should make information about
rare animals _____
known to the public. Let’s keep on mind that
protecting animals _____
is duty of everyone. Meanwhile, we should take
active and effective _____
measures. After all, protecting animals are
protecting ourselves. _____