第三卷：写作（短文改错，写作）
Part five: Proof Reading (10 pts.)
请仔细阅读下列短文并改正其中的10个错误。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
One day two young men was walking in 76.___________
the forest while they saw a bear ahead . They 77.____________
tried run away. One of them got up into a 78.____________
tree, other was fat and could not climb up . 79.____________
But he threw himself at the foot of the tree. 80.____________
Soon the bear came nearly. It saw the fat 81.____________
man .The man held his breathe . The bear thought 82.________
____
he was died, so it went away.The man in the
七、Error correction(短文改错)10分
Mr.Smith was a biology professor,but he had 1._________
a lot of animal bones that he was very proud.Then 2._________
one year he managed to get a better job in others 3._________
university.As he was busy at the work,his wife asked 4._________
three men to remove all their things to the new house. 5._________
One of them was just about throw a large box into the 6._________
truck with all the other things,then Mrs.Smith ran 7._________
out and said,“Please treat the box gentle! It has 8._________
all of my husband's bones in it.” Heard this,the 9._________
man was so surprising that he nearly dropped it on his feet.10._________
七、Error correction(短文改错)10分
Coffee houses can be seen anywhere in America. 1._________
The Europeans brought the idea with them.Soon it 2._________
became of their favorite drink.Today people in the 3._________
USA drink more coffee than people in any country. 4._________
They drink them at breakfast,at lunch and between 5._________
meal,and not only at home but also at work.Coffee 6._________
is also drinking around the world.Some people like 7._________
coffee is very black and very strong.But others like 8._________
coffee with cream or sugar,or cream and sugar with 9._________
it.Now coffee has become a world-widely drink. 10._________
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，共15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
It rained very hardly last summer and the little 44．
stream near our house became big river．It burst 45．
through the bank．The fields all round was soon full 46．
of water．Luckily，the water didn’t reach any of the 47．
house in our village．But the bursting water from the 48．
river carried away our wooden bridge，that was over 49．
three hundred of years old．We were very sorry to 50．
lose the oldest thing we have had for such a 51．
long time．We will build a new bridge，so it will 52．
not be so familiar than the one we had before！ 53．
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第三部分：写作（共二节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study 56________
hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience 57________
pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected 58 ________
because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor 59 ________
peasant family, but I really know life is not easy. All the 60 ________
things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could 61 ________
lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “no pains, no 62 ________
gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother’s expectation and 63 ________
have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the 64________
pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing. 65________