下边一篇短文中有10处错误。请你进行修改,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(/)划掉
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.史允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Walter’s goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high
school first, so he put his heart into his study—in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths.
Because he worked hard at these subjects. Walter became good at it. However, Walter forgot
that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result,
Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to repeat
these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate like planned. Walter learned a good lesson.
下文共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One afternoon, while I was doing my homework, then suddenly I heard someone knocking at the door. I rose my head, looking out of the window to see who it was. A man of about 50 broad shoulders and glasses were standing on the door steps. He was tall, wearing in an old army coat. He grew a wild beard. A big black hat was pulling forward over his eyes so that it was hard to see her face clearly. His shoes were old but worn out. It was a big hole in one of his socks. He had with him a black box in one hand. Only after I took a few more closer looks at him I recognize that he was my neighbor ten years ago.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father was a first - class chef.I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef.Three years later,I became head chef in restaurant.Soon after which,I realized my career was becoming successful and I found I had to make a choice.I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own.And my father became ill and I got his job. On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception.What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold.With my hands shook, I entered the kitchen.I hold my breath, stood up and said “You all know my Father.Whether you loved him or hated him, I don’t care about.It’s the past. Now, Let’s get to work...”
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture for him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in the picture, just sunshine, but the artist did so. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat and real. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have living world. People, too, need both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to stop and think about that we might learn of the experience.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer software. As an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.