假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。
One day I had happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in
English . I tried to chat with any of them . To my surprise , I found the oral English of some
junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice but they told me practise
more on QQ. So every day after that I would spend o
ne hour practise my oral English on QQ.
Day by day I le
arned many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I
could even communicate with some college students free.
短文改错（共8小题；每小题0.5分, 满分4分）
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并往该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改8处, 多者（从第9处起）不计分
| 例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was the am completely free then, so I’ll  say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday evening. on |
Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meeting. It was held on Oct.6, when was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do our best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receive your letter.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds the view that senior students have to make a full use of every minute to work hardly at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control myself and forgot all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can accept her ideas.
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Beside, it is important for us to know that has happened at home and abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last evening, I went to teahouse with my best friend Susan. Before the tea was serving, we talked to each other happily. When the waiter went to us with the tea, we didn’t see him. Unfortunately, Susan rose her hand to comb her hair just while the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. His hand hit the cup, and the tea was spattered (溅) on her trousers. In my surprise, instead of complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it’s not on my shirt, and I can’t even clean it.” Her words were very inspired. We cannot foresee what will happen, but looking at it in a positive way can make us be happy.
When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possible it won’t be very hard for us to remember them. The followed is one example. January was named by God Janus. He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in the two directions. He could look forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month that one looks forward to the New Year and thinks about the past year.
Now can you share us the stories about the rest of the months?
The Internet is playing a important part inour daily life. On the net, we could learn aboutnews both home and abroad and some otherinformations as well.We can also make phone calls, send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，andlearn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，wecan enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play thechess or cards．The net even help us do shopping,make a chat with others and make friends with them．In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．