假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your parents will come to Shanghai
and call on me in April 30th. But I'm terrible sorry that I can't meet with you at Shanghai
Pudong International Airport because I have to attend a meeting in Beijing. Now let me tell you the way to your home. When you get out the airport, you can take Bus NO.936 to Rainbow Hotel Shanghai. Walking across Xianxia Road to the west till you see the supermarket on your right. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can
see a bank on your left. The apartment building I lived in is next to the bank. Find Room 601 that my mother will be waiting for you.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
此题要标出并改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个√；如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ʌ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Every one of us can make a great efforts to_____
cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all _____
of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only _____
when we have a real need. That won’t be easy, I know _____
but we have to start anywhere. What’s more, we can go to _____
work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy _____
smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our _____
everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, _____
how many times have you walked our of a room and leave the _____
lights or television when no one else was there? _____
Animals are close friend of human beings.
Their existence_____
especially that the existence of rare animals,
makes the whole _____
world lively and colourful. Unlucky, we have
heard such news that _____
rare animals, even keeping in the zoo, can’t
escape being hurt_____
and killed. You may wonder how this can happen.
The reason _____
is that some people lacked understanding about
these animals and care little about them. _____
However, we should make information about
rare animals _____
known to the public. Let’s keep on mind that
protecting animals _____
is duty of everyone. Meanwhile, we should take
active and effective _____
measures. After all, protecting animals are
protecting ourselves. _____
It is Sunday. Li Ming is busy with working on his lessons in the afternoon at home. During a break, he relaxes in the window, expecting enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy traffic seems to remind him of something. Like a senior student, facing with the college entrance exams, he feels time is more or less limited for him. He thinks he must careful plan anything in order to solve the remaining problems with his lessons but prepare for the coming exams. Meanwhile, he has to take good care of him. Li Ming is determined to try his best so that he would go to a good university.______
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Angela works at a university as adviser. Students can come and see her for many problems if they need help or advices. Most of them are worried about their studies and exams. Some of them have problems connect with renting flats, though the biggest problem was loneliness. Universities are exciting places but some students fund difficult to make friends. They miss their families but feel lost in the new environment. They are upset. Angela’s job is to listen to and try to understand whether they are feeling. And of course she also gives practical advice when she is needed._______
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