假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的-优题课

Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.

I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.

College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.

第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1．5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My family has been going through hard times late．I don’t let that to get me down．So Istartedworking in my spare times．One weekend I was going to buy a pair of new shoes by the money I’dsaved．That same weekend my mom was upset because my grandparents needed some money forone of their bills．So she didn’t have enough money to give them．So I got a envelope and wrotemy grandparents a letter, say I love them and I would send them the money．It made my mom crytears of joy after learning of that I had done．It makes my grandparents crytoo because they didn’t know a teen as me could care so much

第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标题号的每一行做出判断,每行只有一个错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I like music very much, especially pop songs. Every
evening while I am doing my homework and at weekends 56．
when I stay at the home, I always play some of my favorite 57．
songs on tapes. The pleased patterns of notes attract me into 58．
the colorful world of music. Now and then I stop follow the 59．
songs. More often than not, my mother comes in, ask 60．
me to fix her attention on my work. She does not like 61．
pop music. Like most growing-ups, she enjoys folk 62．
songs, because the peaceful music reminds her in her 63．
beautiful life when she is young. It is true that people of 64．
different ages understand music differently and then enjoy 65．
different music.