假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
文中共有10个错,每句中最多有两处。改错如下:
多一个词,把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉,缺一个词,在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,在∧下写出正确的词。错一个词,在错的词下划一横线,在横线下写出正确的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处。多者(从11处起)不计分。
There was a lot of passengers on a city bus. When the bus arrived at a stop, the pretty woman got on the bus. All the passengers kept their eyes fixing on her. An old man near the door attempted to get up, and the woman forced him back into her seat. “Thank you, but please sit down,” she said. “But, madam…” replies the man. “You really needn’t to do that since I’m young,” interrupted the woman. Later, the man tried to rise again but stopped by the woman. Finally the man managed to rise and said angry, “The bus has carried me three blocks beyond my house. I have to get on.”
下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man was driving on the road.Sudden his car stopped.He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble.“It’s the motor.” said voice behind him.He was surprising and turned around.
And he saw only an old horse.“Did you say something?” he asked.“ I said you should check yours motor,” the horse replied.The man rushed to the nearest house.With a very excited voice, he told the farmer that what had happened.The farmer, however, showed no sign of excitement.He explained , “He didn’t know anything about cars.He can only repeat what I often say.”
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew the accident. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently we have a hot discussion on if people should keep pets at home in cities or not.
Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets because of many old people living alone can get
comfort from them. Beside, getting along well with animals will make our life interested. On the
other hand, other students are against the idea. In their opinions, if too many people keep pets at
home, it’s bad to the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noisy and even attack
people. I like animals, but I don’t think it bad to keep pets at home. But we must take measures to
keep them polluting our environment.
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.