假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When Jack bowed to someone, he always did it much too quickly.They needn't to wait
any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no manner.Then a
warm-hearted man teaches him, "When you bow to somebody next time, you can count the
January, February, March, until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus, the ceremony
will almost perfect.The next day, he met his uncle, but he did as the man told him to.The bow
was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look.When Jack looked
down, he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by, "In which month did she go away?"
I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to men. With my pleasure, I saw something and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”
I'd like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form into the good habit of thinking in English.I listen to a lot and talk with others in English.In this way, I was improved both my hearing and my spoken English.I keep a diary in English every day but my spoken English is becoming better and better.I also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledge. By this means, I can express itself in English correct. That's the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be useful to you.That's all. Thank you.
If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, Since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievements. In a short, I will do my best to help making the Games a successful.
For the final speaker here today, I would like to share you some of the conclusions of our research.We wanted to know that the Internet would become the most popular source of news for people.They have found that although the Internet has become increasing popular, the number of people which get news from the Internet compares to the radio or television is still small.While the Internet is a popular tool, it is still not as easily accessible with newspapers, television and the radio is, and due to the amount of uncontrolled information on the Internet, people do not always trust the news they find it online.
I went to see film after supper. On my way to the cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had taken place in the past few years and she told me anything about Britain and her family. Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise my spoken English, If I hadn’t worked hard at English, I would have been able to help her.